Well this story is panning out pretty much like i thought it would, which is no bad thing. I have to say up front that I'm not a great fan of robotisation on the whole. But Marcy does retain anough of her femininity to keep my interest levels high. I particularly like the transluscent blue accessory she's covering her breasts with at the end.

OK so Marcy is cool and she's had an interesting time of it. The cyborg cop had his part to play and it worked although I thought he was a little bit too heavy on the implant front and why does he still have hi trousers on?. I know it was supposed to be sentius first try but he is supposed to be a supercomputer isn't he?

This particular episode is high on erortic content and I'm guessing that the ASFR crowd will be jumping with joy.

I'm hoping there is another chaprer and echo the thoughts of another poster at the hipcomix forum who wants to see her meet up with twisted and the girls.

I didn't enjoy this as much as the ealier stories but Carnel knowledge has kept my interest especially as the model used for Marcy is as hot as any that have grace any of the twisted tales.

Looking forward to seeing where the next episode is going. Perhaps a little more struggling against the mind control process "de jour would not go amiss.But that maybe just me.

Once agian you can't fault finisters artwork and use of models and Doc Robo's text shows a good affinity with the pictures and the post transformation dialogue is very very good.

Thanks Guys

Thanks Mesmer for the honest opinions. It is much appreciated, especially coming from a seasoned mind control and heroine aficionado such as yourself.

I know that the cyborg cop wasn't a favorite but I feel that he was a necessary evil (no pun intended) as a 'tool' (again another bad pun) of Sentius. We kept his pants on as long as possible basically to keep his unit out of the picture until it was absolutely necessary. We also wanted him to be a bit more heavily implanted so Marcy's final cyborg look would seem even more feminine and sensual. I think it worked. We've had that chrome and blue bra kicking around for a while now. Isn't it great?

There is one more update planned for "Carnal Knowledge" to round out the chapter. Then it is on to "Twisted Tales" episode 4!

OK that makes sense. sort of negative reinforcement. I can live with that. as I said they were only minor niggles and did not spoil my enjoyment of the story. The main thing I was objecting to was the prop used over his shoulder. I couldn't see a use or reason for it. It made him look more like a furueistic gladiator than human cyborg mix.

That's the Black and Decker power jack-off arm....available at Sears I think

If your right arm gets tired, let the Power Jack do the stroking for you.

Special just this week, buy one get a lefty for free

yeah very good. I think that might rip your dick off before you got anywhere near finished.

Ummm, would that make it a Black and Decker pecker wrecker?

It might indeed

His pants stayed on until the sex scene because not many guys are interested in seeing some other guy's shlong exposed unless it's being put to use in a mind controlled babe.

It's kinda like reverse Disneyland censorship, but after the sequence with just the guy we thought we'd focus on the naked female and not the robo-shlong....

...if that makes any sense

I think for some of us straight guys it can be a delicate situation - but I think Doc handled it pretty well.

What about those Colts, eh?

That's exactly what we were going for. There are plenty of other places to go to see a woman ravaged by some sort of sex machine. We wanted a bit more human quality while retaining that overall mind control/enslavement feel. I think we struck a decent balance.