Awesome story

Have to admit that the mid-fight twist caught me off guard, esp considering the history those two have. Wonder what lead to VG's and Mechana's sudden change of heart? Should be an interesting explanation. And where's Marcy in all this? Cant imagine she'll be too please. Oh, the suspense...

But I think the icing on the cake was the last panel. I can only imagine the "punishment" Alpha Woman has in store for Valiant Grrl. (strangely though, AW doesn't strike me as vindictive type)

Cant wait for the next installment. Again, great job Doc

Who knows? Maybe Alpha Woman has a secret dominatrix fetish and shackles Valient Grrl up while wearing provocative black leather and toting a whip before making her call her "Mistress".

... or not.

There is nothing about that idea that i didnt like

An end result could be a new disciplinary action for insubordinate heroines in the newest "training" facility in the Superheroine Squad HQ-Alpha Woman's Dungeon

Besides the punishment, will Mechana take Valiant Girl to bed to continue since every heroine has their own room at headquarters?

Great discussions, everyone. Keep it coming. I am pleased that you all are brainstorming such great ideas, yet no one has come up with the actual plot yet!

If noe of us has come up with the actual plot yet, that's a very good thing.

Good storytelling that draws in readers and keeps them guessing just makes it more sexy!

attempt at a plot:

How about Mechana and VG keep this affair under wraps but they don't know that their partners, AW and Marcy know about their little affair.

They both decide to team up and punish them sexually.

Nah, sounds a little too vindictive. Perhaps both will be heartbroken and turn to each other for some lovin'.

... I have way too much time on my hands to be thinking this stuff up.

I like that Akonkid more lovin'

By the way Doctor Robo and Finister thanks for delivering a short naked/bra and panties match.

It's a dirty job, but someone's gotta do it...

- Doc

Curiouser and curiouser....the only think i could think of is that this is a way of testing Alpha Woman and Valiant Grrl's love for one another. After re-reading this story and some past issues it appears that the two havent had much time to spend with one and another since the "Night of the Drones"

But that still doesnt explain VG's sudden change in attitude. Perhaps there is something more fiendish going on here that we cant see at the moment...

Obviously Alpha Woman will be involved in the next chapter... but how?

I have posted the cover for part two of "Tough Love". Check back on Sunday, May 18 for the full issue, plus a special announcement about the future of Doc Robo's comix...

http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery2/v/HIP ... 2.jpg.html

- Doc

It's that time of the month... time for another exciting installment of "Grime City Stories"!

This month we wrap up another short story with chapter 2 of "Tough Love". In chapter 1 we saw the Superheroine Squad's two resident powerhouses go toe-to-toe to see just who was the toughest broad on the force. A strange thing happened on the way to a winner, when the two buxom brawling babes suddenly got the hots for each other! Something funny is in the air at Superheroine Squad headquarters, because Valient Grrl and Mechana aren't the only women being affected by this onset of lustful desire. Want to know what happens when an entire team of smoking hot heroines comes down with a case of carnal fever? Find out in "Tough Love", written by Doctor Robo and illustrated by Finister Foul and available exclusively at HIPComix.com!

http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/galler ... ster-Foul/

Also, a quick announcement - starting in June look for a new Doctor Robo story each week throughout the summer, with art by Uroboros, Finister Foul, and Akonkid. That's right folks... mind control Sundays are back! Stay tuned for more details!

I'm running out of things to praise. But, hey, I figured they don't get sick of me saying it.

The art was once again beautiful beyond compare. Finister outdoes himself again with some great pics with awesome composition, lighting, and other details that really makes me feel awkward and uncomfortable doing my own renders...

The storyline certainly raises a lot of questions, but really gives some direction and opens up some possibilities for quite a few characters, mainly my favorite mad scientist and a criminally-underused Grrl Power cadet.

Dialogue was as usually witty, clever, and well delivered. And it was interesting to see the girls use their powers in, er, "creative" ways.

I guess my only complaint, which isn't really a complaint at all, is that I want more, and the painful wait between installments certainly doesn't help. But this is more than enough to tie me over for another month.

A lustful update is what I can sum up.

Nice skimpy wear by Crissy and nice sporty underwear even though i saw it already.

I whole heartedly agree with Akonkid-great art and story. I love the twist (so to speak) with Crissy and Ted. I also enjoyed the fact that it ends with that kinda hanging feeling that keeps us salivating for more.

And great news about June, just one more thing to look forward to this summer

This was alot of fun! Looking forward to more. Thanks again!

The whole "cooling off" with Snowflake, and Jade's "natural" vibraters were great!

I like the idea Chrissy has for herself...very interesting, and if its Ted, quite a temptation.

Now that's what I call "projecting" a thought, or even better a dream. This time it got them all instead of just Snowflake and Solaria.