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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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 Grime City Stories: Tough Love
Hey everyone... On Sunday, April 20 Finister and I will unveil our second Grime City Story: "Tough Love". To whet your appetites, we have posted the cover page to chapter one in the free covers gallery of HIPComix.
http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery2/v/HIP ... 1.jpg.html
Check back next week to see the full chapter!
- Doc
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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From that sexy cover with two women in bra and panties there seems to be some jealousy.  Hoping my hunch is right.
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Mon Apr 14, 2008 7:56 am |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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You aren't too far off...
- Doc
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Mon Apr 14, 2008 9:32 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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Where did the girl buy her sexy bra and panties 
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Tue Apr 15, 2008 7:43 am |
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leto17
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Joined: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:22 pm Posts: 259
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Gee...I can't imagine who they would be jealous over (yeah right). Given both of their love interests, i would speculate that if it involves them, this would be incredibly complicated...and fun!
Looks very promising!
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:03 am |
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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I wonder how will this play out?
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 12:39 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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You're about half right...
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:21 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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Bet you Marcy is involved  .
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:58 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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Don't be too sure of yourself... 
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 10:41 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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In one of the last episodes of superheroine squad Marcy and Mechana were discussing if it would be alright to stay by Marcy.
I wonder how has that worked out? 
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Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:35 am |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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 Members Area Update for 4/20: "Tough Love"
Available now in the members area of HIPComix, it's volume two of "Grime City Stories"... "Tough Love"!
On the heels of "Superheroine Squad", the amazonian android known as Mechana has become a member of Metrobay's famous crimefighting team after being rescued from the evil clutches of APEX Laboratories. Even though she is now on the side of good, her noble intentions are still mistrusted by some teammates, particularly her former nemesis Valient Grrl.
Late one night the two buxom brunettes find themselves alone in the gym and decide to settle their feud once and for all. In the heat of battle something happens to both of them which makes them forget their fight altogether and concentrate on a less violent display of physical prowess. So what happens when two sexy, headstrong, erotically charged heroines get together with only one thing on their minds? Find out in part one of "Tough Love", a Doctor Robo/Finister Foul comic found only at HIPComix.com!
http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/galler ... ster-Foul/
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Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:04 am |
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Akonkid
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Joined: Sat Mar 11, 2006 8:33 pm Posts: 310 Location: Nowhere
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Oh boy...
Okay, those who know me know I'm a passionate Valient Grrl fan. I also happen to be rather fond of Mechana. I've also been toting a Valient Grrl vs. Mechana grudge match for a long time now.
So, what do I think?
It's a little slice of heaven. Nothing truly unexpected, but executed flawlessly.
From the opening page, we get a little taste of why I like Valient Grrl so much. She's a statuesque Amazonian bombshell and fiery powerhouse with a body so fit and firm it makes Jessica Alba look flabby. It's the little details in the story, though, that make her such a compelling character from a story perspective. It speaks a lot about her work ethic and her attitude towards her own genetic powers.
Mechana, on the other hand, has quickly and pleasantly evolved from mindless big-girl submissive to a rather fiesty and, dare I say, kinda bitchy woman bursting with emotions and personality. And a lot of that comes from Valient Grrl, only without the human experience and interaction to teach her to keep some of her own opinions and feelings in check. Needless to say, I love her for it. The way she taunts her fellow teammate and goads her into a confrontation is pliable, effective, and believable.
And on to the fight itself... Doc tends to shy away from the actual violence, which is good for most of the time (I really don't need to see women beating up other women to get turned on), but this time is different, and like the few actions scenes before, they're well done, especially for a comic book medium. Camera shots are effective, actions are evenly distributed, and the pace is frentic and fast. The quasi "ring announcer" narrations weren't bad either.
Which gets us to the next "battle for supremacy"; love, sweet love. I was surprised just who it was who made the first move, but the two unlikely lovers proved that their combined superhuman sex affair is a match made in heaven and really does believably make you wonder just who the most sexually adapt woman is... an odd but likeable battle within the battle.
Which brings us to the ending, which seems to raise a few questions about just what happened and what's going to happen... as well as force a very painful wait for the next installment.
Overall, excellent, through and through. While newcomers may not get much out of it (and if you're new, go read the past 10,000 pages of previous material), those fans who saw and wanted a true Valient Grrl vs. Mechana stand/sex off since Project Metropolis finally get it, and it was worth the wait. Not only that, it's arguably the best action sequence in the franchise yet.
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Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:42 am |
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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Now that was tough love.
Ripping each other's bra and panties.
Love the feud which turned me on.
Not sure if that was a workout top and bottom more like casual bra and panties which I like. 
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Sun Apr 20, 2008 7:18 pm |
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dumbtime
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Joined: Tue Oct 17, 2006 7:42 am Posts: 163 Location: secret underground basement laboratory
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Seeing the cover provoked previous thoughts of anticipation from the "Superheroine Squad - Night of the Drones" series:
Now seeing the first chapter of the episode "Tough Love" I find myself agreeing with how Akonkid put it.
My only input is to say that they both have the same strength, but each has different aspects that could change or counter the balance of the of the fight. VG has the human spontaneity and experience, while Mech, being a machine would be more calculating and precise. I think in the end, VG's agility and experience is greater but her ability to absorb the blows that Mech sends her way is lesser.
In this episode, it looks like Mech's humanness has interfered with her precise and calculating action, else she would have finished VG when she had her down. Awesome job on transitioning over the fight to the distraction of sexual attraction. Sexual attraction can be a distraction for anybody, just look at me, I'm now distracted from finishing my work for tomorrow after seeing these new panels.
Also, the last panel has really peeked my curiosity. I sense another magnificant Doc Robo vice of story-telling approaching.
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Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:34 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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By the way can Mechana insert artificial semen in women?
Anyway she can impregnate Valiant Girl?
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:06 pm |
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Akonkid
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Joined: Sat Mar 11, 2006 8:33 pm Posts: 310 Location: Nowhere
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Er, I'm pretty sure Mechana's wearing a strap-on.... and if she did, I'm sure it would only be harmless nanoprobes or something.
... though I do smile at the thought of Valient Grrl trying to explain to Alpha Woman how she got knocked up with Mechana's love child. 
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:53 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
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Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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I agree there, but wasn't she able to form her own female cock?
Afterall she was built for pleasure both ways especially to give the pleasure. 
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:57 pm |
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Akonkid
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Joined: Sat Mar 11, 2006 8:33 pm Posts: 310 Location: Nowhere
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I always assumed it was a snap-on accessory. I know Sentius' Controlunits and Slaveunits could form artificial ones, but I don't think any genetic information was passed on.
Mechana is, as I liked to say, just a "really big vibrator." 
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:05 pm |
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leto17
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Joined: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:22 pm Posts: 259
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That was a fun story. I enjoyed it alot!
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:17 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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Akonkid pretty much has it right. Mechana's little add-on is just another option for her to fulfill her program. Unlike Sentius, there is no other use for that little device. Sorry.
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:34 pm |
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