Another great chapter. I love the chemistry Solaria and Snowflake have; it's amusing. And it was delightful to see the Alpha Woman and Valiant Grrl scene from "Mind Games" replayed in a way, only with the roles reversed. Bravo.

Doc and Fin:
I loved this weeks episode. Please keep up the great work and ideas.

Please please take Ms. Metrobay soon. She really needs to be controlled. As I said before: "Suede control unit"???

The junior leaguers need to be put under as soon as possible as well.
And last but not least Belinda too.

A controlled/roboticized superheroine is the right kind of superheroine, I always say.

keep it up guys.

Bluemax

Evil Queen? Hmmmmm... why should he settle for just one when he has seven (and counting)?

Thanks! I am having fun teaming these characters up and having them play off of each other. Glad you are enjoying it!

- Doc

Thanks! We have plans in the works for nearly every character that has been introduced thus far, plus some who haven't. I don't want to say more without ruining any surprises, so as they say... stay tuned!

Hello,

Firstly, I’d like to say good work to both Finister Foul and Dr. Robo. I have been browsing the site and there's some nice stuff here but I like this series most as it's not as dark and violent as some of the others in the Member's Section. I guess I've been a fantasy MC fan since watching Saturday morning cartoons, so this story interested me more than the rest. I have a few thoughts.

Things that I liked and enjoyed:

+ There were a lot of characters that I liked aesthetically. Finister Foul has an exceptional art style with the Poser program. My favorites would be Alpha Woman, Jade Lightning and Snowflake. Brown Sugar is also an aesthetically pleasing character. Of all the stories that I’ve seen here, I like the art style of Uroboros and Finister Foul the most.

+ The high level plotline is good. You can guess what is going to happen but how it happens often brings something new you weren't expecting or a sub plot that helps to enhance the story. I really like the little things and details that just help to build Metro Bay into a more believable place. Metro Bay started off as just a setting for a narrow story but as things have continued, the environment is starting to grow as well. You can really track the development of things from the beginning to where it is now. Finister Foul's side stories are also an enjoyable addition to these main stories.

+ The robotic costume designs are very nice. The silver ones in the earlier stories where appealing and now these rubbery ones are very sexy as well. They remind me of "Hounds", those enslaved mutants used by Ahab and the Shadow King in the X-Men comics.

Some of my other thoughts:

+ The robo speak is nice but it became quite repetitive to me after I read all the Super heroine stories in one sitting. I understand that the main theme of these comics is robotic women mind control but I felt they could be saying more interesting things from time to time. What I am seeing in the current story is Sentius making his own Robo Squad. That is, turning a super heroine team into a super villainess robot team commanding platoons of robo drones for a new team of super heroines to fight.
It would be great to see some action packed battles between the control units and other heroines. It would be a shame that because they have been robotized, they have lost their agility and fighting skills. I would really love to see sexy fights with Jade, Brown and White Control Units using their martial arts skills for Sentius. Another thing we miss out on when they are robotized is character development. They can't talk with their own personality so we can't learn more about them which is a shame.
As a way of developing their personalities while they are still robotized, maybe you could develop a plot mechanism where the Control Units can switch between their current state of "robo mode" to "initiative mode" where they can display some of their old personality (although this personality has now been completely corrupted with a lustful dedication to their new master). Maybe their eyes can change color as their mode changes. I feel the chance to get some of their characterizations out would really help to boost the richness of the Metro Bay world.

+ I’m also a fan of vampires since they have an MC aspect to them. Just for fun, you could do something like give the one of the robo women (or Sentius) simulated vampire abilities. For example, they have green eyes, similar to the ray used to hypnotize them. Maybe this means the more powerful units can shoot hypno beams from their eyes. Once a victim is hypnotized, some bionic teeth extensions could inject a poison or nanomachines into the hypnotized victim, turning them into a thrall of the robo women. That would be something interesting to see. There must be a few vampire fans here that would like to see a vampire-like conversion, even though the main theme to the story is robotization.

+ Some of the heroines should fight much harder against the control. Some of them in into and out of the control too easily, I feel. It feels more satisfying after they are controlled only after a long fight.

+ More sex scenes with the robo girls? Conversion scenes are excellent but I like the rubber body suit sex scenes as well. Maybe the nanosheath that they wear can shape dildos? You haven’t done any anal scenes in all your stories. It’s pretty standard for porn these days and I’d like to see one or two of these.

Anyway, thanks for listening.
I find the Superheroine Squad stories to be the ones I’ve spent the most time on at HipComix. They appeal to my adult male sensibilities but the bright style has touches of the colorful cartoons of my youth. It is excellent that they come out regularly as well. As others have mentioned, it would be great to see all these current characters enslaved and then have a new group of heroines have to fight against them. I would love to see a Control Unit Flame and Frost double team, too!
Once again, great work for all that are involved in making these stories and I hope some of my thoughts here aren't taken in a negative light.

Hello Black Dissolve! First let me say welcome to HIPComix and to the forums. I think I speak for Finister when I say 'thank you' for your tremendous comments. We are glad that you took the time to jot down your opinions and ideas and share them with us and the rest of the discussion participants here. I am happy to see both compliments and criticism, and I do not take any of your comments in a negative light. Don't worry about that. I will attempt to answer your questions as best I can, but please forgive me if I missed something.

1) The tone of the Twisted Tales and Superheroine Squad stories are supposed to fairly serious and straightforward while at the same time not taking themselves too seriously. We realize that most readers are here for the fantasy and fetish aspect, which we aim to deliver. You won't see any drawn out fights or serious injuries in my stories, because I personally don't find that sexy. That's not a critique of anyone else's work, it's just a fact. I have a longstanding, steadfast rule: No one gets hurt in Metrobay. I might bend that rule on occasion but it is never broken.

2) It's no secret that Finister Foul is a tremendous Poser artist and I am extremely lucky to get to work with him week in and week out. I don't think I need to say any more.

3) We made a conscious decision a while ago to build the "Metrobay Universe" into a full-service fictional world piece by little piece. It is a challenge keeping all of these intertwining stories and characters straight, but a lot of fun too. There is probably a stigma attached to our work because of the adult nature of it, but I don't care. I am proud of what we have built and what we continue to build as long as we are able.

4) Credit goes to Finister for those nice shiny robosuits. I think they came out very nicely and help get across the idea that these women are not part of a larger collective while allowing them to retain some individuality for the sake of visual presence. I am glad that you are enjoying them as well.

5) I know what you are saying about the 'robo-speak' and the lack of character development while the women are under Sentius's power. Unfortunately in order to satisfy our mind control and robo fantasy fanbase something else had to give, and that was it. We have some ideas for future episodes which will hopefully allow us to do more character exploration, so stay tuned for future announcements on that front.

6) Robo-vampires, huh? Interesting idea. I will definitely keep that in mind.

7) The H.E.R. control system was designed to be an improvement over Sentius's first attempt that world domination. That's why it is so much more difficult to resist. I do try to mix in some resistance when I think it works within the storyline, like with Valient Grrl last issue. I'll see if I can fit more of that in from time to time.

8 ) I have more sex scenes planned. The story is far from over, I can assure everyone of that. There will be plenty more robo-lovin' before the day is done. I promise.

Thanks again for the excellent comments, and for your support of our work and of HIPComix. You have set the standard for discussion that I hope others try to match!

- Doc

Loved the last installment...

Could the 'drastic action' to try and deal with H.E.R. suggested by Mechana involve submitting to the control of another mind controller to try and avoid the seemingly unstoppable H.E.R. programming...or would that be too much of a stretch?

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Could be... we have a few tricks up our sleeves but that is not a bad idea. We'll keep it in mind.

- Doc

I like the Vampire idea Balck Dessolve put forward. It has mind control elevents and while in the past the plot has been driven by a male figure I think a Female protaganist might drive this idea very well.

Perhaps deep in the recesses of APEX Labs a long forgoten and uncontrolable prototype of a female/robot blending might have been scraped and put on ice. It is released by an unsuspecting female researcher and after she is attacked she joins the ranks of this sexy and relentless Vampiric robot femme. I like the idea of Nano enriched fangs growing on the new spawn and a likewise abandonment of her altruistic nature for her new more evil mission to serve her Queen.
It is like something I placed in the sugestion area although without the vampire elevent. If you don't like the robot stored on ice concept it could be a Nanite Fromula that would create the new Hybred and the innocent woman is exposed to it and is transformed.

With Halloween only a week away, we thought we this week's update should have a certain holiday flair. In that light, here is the cover page for October 21st's "Robotica Erotica" update:

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Check back Sunday for the full issue!

- Doc

Very nice Vampira outfit. Classy Goth. This last episode was also fantastic as usual!

The robotic vampire idea is interesting. One way to spread the "infection" if you will. Nanovibrator implants are also a nice idea and have been used in the past. Some more use might also be nice....

One thing no one has thought of: how about a good mad scientist who uses her powers to robotize and control villianesses? Belinda's twin sister or Marcy and Mechana mayabe, although MArcybot is just so very sexy when she pops up!

Hmmm... that's an interesting thought, although it would kind of go against the whole Heroines In Peril Comics theme, no?

It is Halloween night in Metrobay, a city where costumes are a part of life and the freaks come out to play every night. So what makes this Halloween so special? Well, for starters there is a huge masquerade at R.O.P.E. mansion, hosted by the villainous dowager Belinda Giolla. ALL of the most wealthy and influential members of Metrobay society will be there, including their special guests... the Superheroine Squad! But how can this be? Isn't Belinda in prison, sentenced to to serve hard time with her hated enemy Dr. Twisted? Why would the superheroines attend a party and socialize with known criminals and rich elite snobs? Is this another wicked mind control plot, and are they being for--d to attend? If so, which dastardly fiend is behind the whole thing?

To find out the answers to these questions and to see the most beautiful women in 3D comics dressed up in unbelieveably sexy Halloween costumes, check out "Superheroine Squad" by Doctor Robo and Finister Foul. It is available exclusively at www.HIPComix.com, so sign up today!

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One more thing: As a special Halloween treat, HIPComix members will find an extra little goody in their bag this week. That's right... a bonus sample of a future Superheroine Squad story, set on Halloween night 61 years ago and starring Valiant Woman and Miss Metrobay! It's the origin of the Superheroine Squad, coming in 2008 to HIPComix.com!

One of the better Treats I've gotten around Halloween in recent years. Bravo. One of my new favorite chapters thus far. Honestly, this fulfills nearly EVERY fetish I can think of.

I love this fun chapter. It shows the real nightmere for a villian is treatment equal to what she offers her former victems. I love the last pannel the best. I think the retro hair style make it look all the more artisticly pleasing.

Yes, that was a lot of sexy erotic fun. Very inventive, and i liked the costumes you gave each lady. I especially liked your Bride of Frankenstein Maid moti for Belinda. Very Hot!

I've always though the Bride of Frnakenstein could be really sexy if done right!

Thanks for the great comments everyone, both here and in the galleries. I do encourage everyone to continue to offer their thoughts and opinions here, if only because it is much easier for everyone else to see them and respond.

Anyway, here is the cover for the November 4th update:

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Also, my main man Finister Foul has graced us with a couple more excellent one-shot sample pics. You can find them in our free gallery here:

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Check back Sunday for more Metrobay Universe madness!

- Doc

After last week's little Halloween sidebar it is time to jump right back into the action with another issue of "Robotica Erotica", episode eight of the combined "Twisted Tales/Superheroine Squad" saga!

When we left off two weeks ago, the junior heroine known as Solaria had been mesmerized by the sinister HER-TV mind control ray. She was subliminally commanded to leave Superheroine Squad and march to Sentius's factory, where she faces almost certain conversion into a mindless cybernetic slave. Luckily for Solaria her teammate Snowflake was able to avoid entrancement and is following her friend, hoping to find out what has caused her to act this way.

At the same time across town Silver Satin, Mechana, and Ms. Metrobay have left headquarters in search of their missing comrades. These three lovely crimefighters may very well be the last hope for a city that doesn't even realize it is quietly under attack from an insidious mechanical menace.

Will these brave and beautiful heroines be able to stop Sentius and save their robotified teammates, or are they doomed to the same hideous fate? To find out, read "Superheroine Squad" by Doctor Robo and Finister Foul. It is produced every Sunday exclusively for HIPComix.com!

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This was a very erotic chapter. I liked the way you presented the "Newly Minted" Controlunits and thought the way you had Valiant Girl put Snowflake under ther control with augmented Mind Powers was fantasic. Just restraining Showflake would be so run of the mill. It is like Showflake was offered her first taste of her new Religion.
I like the Mother/Daughter thrawls. It would be so hot to see them as a special "Shock Squad" or something like that. Just think of the erotic permutations available there. hehe