There is not much more that I can add that the others haven't already mentioned. Excellent work so far. I can only begin to imagine what Sentius has in store for his controlunits, and what Marcy has in mind with Mechana!

I think this last chapter has put the strip back on track after a fairly good but place saving chapter with Mech and Marcy. I liked RoboMarcy ever since her creation and enjoyed her recapture ever so much. It was brief though and wish there was more.
Since I like it when the bad guys win and the good femmes are traped in the web of evil I feel the ever widening capture of the Squad is like super rich chocolat. I do have some questions about all the seperate threads though.

1. What did Max need of Marcy in the opening chapters since up to now Max and Sentius have been working seperatly?

2.Why did Max let Marcy go when he might have simply submerged her control of her like a sleeper cell and had her be his most distructive agent of change?

3.With such a strong force of evil femmes at his disposal why isn't Sentius making a move on the MetroBay area at large? I mean he as the portable control beam and I bet he could cause some real panic if Brown ControlUnit and Gold ControlUnit worked the high end of the city and the Rose ControlUnit devestating the Latin Quarter of it's commly Latina population.

In any case more resistance and strugle before complience would make it so much more "Interesting" I loved the Mis MetroBay scene from your pervious stores.

Keep up the good work.

I agree with Vestia about the struggle before compliance. It would be neato to see the short mental struggle, the next victim has with an encounter with Blackout's ray gun, panned out some over a few more scenes.

Something like a confused "whats going on?", to a "hey, whats that device?", to a "whats this light doing to me?", and so on until you reach the "can't rest, must comply."

That would be this viewer's only wishful suggestion to this outstanding story.

Great questions! I'll do my best to answer them as honestly as possible without spoiling any future storylines.

1) Max is a bastard. He probably could have had any of his flunkies run that errand for him but he chose to use Marcy as a symbol of his control over her. He didn't want to do it himself of course, because this way if anyone asks questions he can deny any personal connection to the factory.

2) The mind control technology is experimental at best. Although Max is in many cases 'above the law' due to his wealth and influence around town, he is not bulletproof and he knows that the Superheroine Squad are just looking for a way to take him and APEX down. If there was a flaw in her programming and somehow they discovered that Marcy was under Max's control, he'd be in enough trouble that all the high priced lawyers in the city wouldn't be able to dig him out.

3) Sentius is still building his force of Robounits and Controlunits. It may not seem this way, but there are a lot more heroines in Metrobay than just who we have seen so far in "Superheroine Squad". He knows this and wants to have all of the most powerful heroines under his command before attempting to enslave the community at large. He is a machine. He can be patient.

I'll try to draw out the struggle against enslavement a bit more while keeping in mind the limitations of my page count. Thanks again for the questions!

- Doc

Things are looking bleak in Metrobay tonight. The Superheroine Squad can't seem to catch a break, and their string of bad luck has no end in sight. The mind control ray emanating from Sentius's factory is stronger than ever, beaming into the television screens of pretty women all across the city and turning them into obedient hypnotic thralls. What's more, every time the Squad sends a team to infiltrate the factory and shut it down, Sentius has a surprise waiting for them! Now Alpha Woman and Valient Grrl have been trapped by the evil machines... and who knows what will happen to them next? With Sentius's track record of turning sexy superheroines into mindless human robots, what chance do his latest captives have of making it out of there unscathed?

To find out you'll need to read "Robotica Erotica", part of the "Superheroine Squad/Twisted Tales" saga. Written by Doctor Robo and illustrated by Finister Foul, it is available exclusively at HIPComix.com!

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Doc,

Another great chapter by you and Finister. I love the way you responded to reader requests in this chapter and look forward to next week's installment.

cvn

Another excellent chapter... and it should please a lot of people who like a little resistance before the enslavement.

But, again, my favorite gal has always been Valiant Grrl, so I'm more than satisfied. And, as a long time fan, it's nice to see the events way back from "Mind Games" repeat themselves, only this time the roles are reversed (Valiant Grrl getting controlled and Alpha Woman trying vainly to get her to fight it.)

Great job. I'm more than excited to see what happens next.

Holy smokes, did you and fin make the submission struggles after the forum posts or was it planned like this all along?

Either way, i'm a happy camper.

Here's hoping that the next victim tries to fight and resist the H.E.R. ray gun and loses.

I have to say you spiced up this last chapter with a whole lot erotic power and promise for the future. I knonw when both those former heros everge from the chambers they will be totaly dedicated to Sentius's plans for Metro Bay. I wish tomorrow was Sunday.

Thanks for the great comments everyone. After a long day at my 'real' job it's nice to come home and know that our hard work is appreciated.

On that note, here is the cover for this week's update... the issue I KNOW some of you have been waiting for!

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I have also added three new character files to the Metrobay Universe free gallery:

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Comments? Questions? We love to hear them! Enjoy!

- Doc

This was a fantasitc cover. Even better then the past cover with the Balck, Brown, and Jade Controlunits. I had no doubt that our Femmes would comply in the end but I love the way you kept thier hair sort of wild . I had thought you would make thier hair more tight and controled like with BrownControlunit and wondered what it would look like but it is just fine this way since it is part of the White and Blue ControlUnits sexual identity.
I can't wait to see how the Blue Controlunit responds to the women who resopnd to her former persona "Alpha Womans" useless call for help.

Holy crap! That cover is HOT!! I can't wait until Sunday. Damn these 24 hour days!!

- BH

Great cover indeed! Looking very much forward to the next chapter! And the character card for the Robounit is fantastic!

Wow, 2 of my 3 favorite of the superheroine squad standing at attention and ready to serve. Only thing that could beat that would be the 3rd one to show up unprepared. Makes a me look forward to the weekends even more.

Valiant Grrl and Alpha Woman always had a very special place in my heart. They were the first "human robots" my eyes ever had the pleasure of viewing, and it's great to see them "return to their roots." Aww, feels like the first time, like the very first time.

I can't keep up with all of these great comments!

Vestia: Glad you like the hair. We aim to please!

Brainhusk: Hang on buddy... just three more days!

Leto: The character bios are a guilty pleasure for me. Writing them may be the most fun I have each week. Glad you like them!

Dumbtime: Two out of three? Who is the third?

Akonkid: Did you just quote Foreigner and try to get away with it?

- Doc

It's good to keep people guessing, lol.

Uggh, hit submit instead of preview.

To finish the last reply.....

the 3rd is the one with alot of stamina, here's hoping it's not enough to withstand the H.E.R. ray gun.

When we last left "Robotica Erotica", Valient Grrl and Alpha Woman had been captured by Sentius and specially prepared for the robotization process. Alpha Woman was locked into a conversion chamber and compelled to watch her mind controlled partner service the evil villain as proof of her loyalty to the H.E.R. hive mind. Now both of them are sealed inside the perilous pods and awaiting the inevitable... transformation into mindlessly obedient drones!

Meanwhile, back at Superheroine Squad headquarters Ms. Metrobay has learned of their plight and immediately started planning for a rescue mission. One problem though... with Sentius's army of sexy robot women growing by the hour, there are only a couple of junior heroines like Snowflake and Solaria left to join the mission. Let's hope they don't watch any H.E.R.-TV and become compliant hypnothralls like their teammates!

To read more of the "Superheroine Squad" saga, log on to HIPComix.com and become a member. If you're a fan of mind control, robot, superheroine, and/or peril erotica then this is one story you can't afford to miss!

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This was a chapter full of good spins. I loved the slow melting of the BlueControl Units normal physical form and awarness. With Sentius now a king with a full herem I wonder who will be his Evil Queen? I think it will soon be the time for her to begin to emerge don't you?