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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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 The new heroine in "Mission Control"
The mad genius known as Finister Foul has created a brand new heroine as the protagonist in "Mission Control". Want to see her? Here's the link:
http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery/album33
She's new to the force and eager to get right to work. Her first assignment: infiltrate APEX Labs and see if the company is involved with the recent rash of disappearances around town. Can she discover who the kidnapper is before another superheroine goes missing? The answer is coming soon!
_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 3:00 pm |
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knyght_16
Henchman
Joined: Wed Dec 28, 2005 1:40 am Posts: 27
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Insert bad Rolling Stones pun here. 
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 3:15 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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 Brown Sugar
I'll admit, the song has run through my head once or twice...
Ah brown sugar how come you taste so good (a-ha) brown sugar, just like a young girl should

_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 3:50 pm |
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kman66
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As long as she ends up cybernetically enhanced, I'm all for tha sister!
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 3:52 pm |
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brainhusk
Faithful Assistant
Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 2:13 pm Posts: 62
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She looks great! Can't wait!
Can I vote for an asian heroine next?
- BH
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:58 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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 Asian heroine
Your request has been duly noted. I will certainly keep that in mind for future episodes.
_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 11:20 pm |
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I've been loving this series. Truly amazing stuff, and I'm loving the new heroine already. How will she get "enhanced" I wonder? The helmet? Through Sentius? Or a new method perhaps? Oh, the possibilities. The 30th can't get here soon enough. Keep up the good work!
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Thu Jan 26, 2006 12:43 am |
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Finister
HIPComix Artist
Joined: Mon Aug 29, 2005 7:29 pm Posts: 902 Location: Metrobay
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click here to see new cover
Getting to be like the Waltons.
Robogrrl "Good night Robowoman"
Robowoman "Good night Marcy"
Marcy "Good night Sentius"
Sentius "Good night Dr twisted"
Dr Twisted "Good night Brown Sugar" 
_________________ Amateur cartoon villain
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Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:36 am |
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lordsomno
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Joined: Thu Dec 29, 2005 3:01 am Posts: 31 Location: Michigan
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I totally agree. Controlling Brown Sugar should be sweet!
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Sun Jan 29, 2006 11:56 pm |
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pelusa1ca
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Joined: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:41 pm Posts: 130 Location: Lurking
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 Georgia Brown
Well now that she has joined the organization I assume she will be used to infiltrate Apex.
Belinda Giolla will never see her coming...
Perhaps suggesting some non-Super Heroes who could help Dr. Twisted in his pursuit of power. Maybe some HR folks need to be brought into the fold to make sure the right sort of women are hired by Apex.
Speaking of Belinda, I wonder if she would be hesitant to employ some female villainesses to try and locate Dr. Twisted? I see sub-plot material...
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Tue Feb 28, 2006 6:34 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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 what's next?
Oh don't you fret... I have plenty of ideas for Belinda. She's going to be an integral part of "Twisted Tales 5", whenever we get to it. Without getting into too many details I'll tell you that she will become a major thorn in Dr. Twisted's side and cause him to have to take a detour from his revenge scheme to deal with her. She will also get some assistance from an unexpected source as she works on her own evil plans.
I'll leave it at that for now. As always, thanks for reading and also for your comments!
_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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Wed Mar 01, 2006 9:39 am |
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leto17
Evil Genius
Joined: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:22 pm Posts: 259
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 re: Belinda
Hello. Great work!
I am glad that you're going to make Belinda a thorn in the side of Dr. Twisted. She has shorter black hair which I like. Her and Marcy Smith are my two favorites so far. As an unscrupulous businesswoman, will she develop her own methods for converting superheroines into robot women or capturing Dr. Twisted's pets? She's going to need some allies if she's going to take on Twisty's harem!
And Marcy is a real cutie-Brown Sugar's nice too. She looked terrific after being converted! An Asian heroine would also be nice. Any chance for short black hair (although if the guy who make the original request for an Asian heroine wants longer hair then never mind me)?
In any event great work!
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Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:32 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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 Belinda vs. Ted?
"Twisty"... I like that.
I'm happy to hear that you enjoying the Twisted Tales. We put a lot of time into creating them, and it's great to know that they are well received.
Let's see... how can I talk about the next episode without ruining any of the storyline? I can tell you that Belinda and Ted Twiss got their start at APEX around the same time, and worked on a lot of projects together. They have a lot of common interests and similar resumes, so one could reasonably assume that they share a lot of knowledge about mind control technology, especially the technology that they worked on together.
When she finds out that Twiss is behind all the kidnappings, her evil mind immediately tries to figure out how to use that information to her advantage. Even though the 'won' the internal power struggle with Ted when he was incarcerated, she figures that if he is on the loose and slowly building a fembot army that she is going to be pretty high on his revenge list. She might think that the best defense is a good offense and try to find a way to take him out before he does the same to her.
Anything else you would like to know?
_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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Wed Mar 08, 2006 4:18 pm |
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leto17
Evil Genius
Joined: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:22 pm Posts: 259
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 re: just a thanks pretty much.
I guess in terms of other things, not that much. Just that I greatly enjoy the series and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you guys! That and I did like the breast suction device used on Alpha Woman when she was converted into Robowoman. Any chance of that returning? How about a vibrator that transmits nanomachines for robotization via pleasure? If you can't say for sure, then no problem.
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Wed Mar 08, 2006 7:10 pm |
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pelusa1ca
Arch-Criminal
Joined: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:41 pm Posts: 130 Location: Lurking
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 The ABCs of Metrobay
Dr. Robo,
Are you looking for reader suggestions to your rules as well?
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Thu Mar 09, 2006 2:32 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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 Re: The ABCs of Metrobay
Certainly. What do you have in mind?
_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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Thu Mar 09, 2006 3:41 pm |
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pelusa1ca
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Joined: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:41 pm Posts: 130 Location: Lurking
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Well another legacy of the vitamins/growth hormones in the water could be a higher percentage of females in the population. That could help to explain the preponderance of female super heroes and help with the story line.
Another idea, if you are looking to expand the story line some more and add in some new players. Perhaps the police are investigating the issue as well with their own team. A Mulder and Skully knock off, where Mulder is a tall, long nosed brunette.  Another group very interested in the nefarious happenings of Metrobay, and one that will sort itself out in the end.
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 12:29 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Two great points. I love the idea of the enriched water causing more women to be born than men. That's great.
As for the separate police investigation team... I'm not sure if that is necessary. The Superheroine Squad is technically part of the police department, and they have been put in charge of looking into the disappearances. Although, a new team may be necessary if Dr. Twisted succeeds in capturing all of the heroines. 
_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 2:55 pm |
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pelusa1ca
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Just throwing more plot twists out there, in case you run out of ideas...I just do not want the story to end. 
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Doctor Robo
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 beyond Mission Control
Don't worry, I don't think that's going to happen anytime soon. We have at least two more full episodes in mind, and of course the door is always open for more if the demand for these stories is still there...
_________________ "I hear always the admonishment of my friends:
'Bolt her in, and constrain her!'
But who will watch the watchmen?"
- Juvenal, Satire VI
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