She looks nice. Very nice. Looking forward to seeing the new type of "robo" technology that will allow her to become the Doc's Spy.

Good teaser episode, moved the plot along and set up the next heroine Takedown nicely. Looking forward to the next bit of good stuff.

Cheers guys.

Thanks, Mesmer. I wish every installment could be as 'fun' as the first one but that would make it really hard to tell a story. I'm extremely pleased that everyone is enjoying the comic so far. Fin and I have been trying to eliminate any idle pages that don't contribute to the advancement of the plot. In other words, we're making every page count. Hopefully that results in a better paced and more action packed comic.

Everyone seems to be really interested in the new control device. I'm here to say that I don't think anyone will be disappointed...

After seeing the cover to the next issue I am dying from anticipation...

Part 5 of "Mission Control" is up in the members area. Comments are welcome and appreciated!

Only makes the wait between installments that much more unbearable. Great job!

Another great chapter in the continuing saga. I am not minding the fact that the plot line is taking it's time to develop. Most graphic novels of this sort just rush through to the final battle scene. This is just great!

I have to say there are two Power Femmes that look better when they are exposed to conversion processes.
The first is Brown Sugar since her African form and facial beauty are naturaly expressive and very pleasing. In all the tales Where she is under outside influences her vissage is most lovly since she is now more an object and a piece of art under the control of her master. It is so erotic and powerful.
The second femme is Marcy. Even thought she was quite buxum and fetching as her natural self I found her a bit weak and wishy washy and uninteresting. As RoboMarcy she is a determined and unstopable force of nature. Her only mission is to obey her master without regard to her past boundries and hesitations. That makes her so Hot it is painfull.
I like them both and know they will be moved forward in future tales and that is one of the many reasons I joined this group.

I'd have to agree. I think Brown Sugar's original 'robot' uniform from "Mission Control" is my favorite of all the alternate costumes. Her character design was done very well and Mister Finister deserves to take a bow for that.

One thing that Marcy and Georgia (that's Brown Sugar to you) have in common is that both have been shown in civilian attire at some point in the series. That is something I would like to explore with more of the characters as time goes on, to try to show what they look like outside of their superheroine costumes.

- Doc

I would also like to see that!

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Yeah I can't agree more. I'd love to see what they do and look like when they unwind and let it all hang loose in their civilian lives.

Also, historical background and character build plus personality in the life outside of fighting super villians will only make the heroines more interesting if its done strategically.
Sometimes if there are no ties to the side story, that information can bore the reader. It has to be intermingled and very interesting as well.
The Brown Sugar/Georgia and Silver Satin/Marcy info and the things Fin is doing with Pink Pussycat as well as Doc bring it into the Metrobay Realm are right on the money.