Greetings all!

After a brief and crazy days of holydays, Here I am again with a new episode in the adventures of the Justice Force, courtesy of Hipcomix.

I hope you like the comic here: http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=163683

And here you've got the cover, the intro and a free promo:







I'm sorry if you detect some misspelling or gramthical errors in this update, I had not got the script correction on time, but when I've got it, I'll correct them.

Hugs
Mitru

Another great episode Mitru.
Very nice black Bodysuit worn by would be rescuer Kagehime.
Dr. Sawyers sexual suffering with her Pussy being teased and stroked by the tongue of Dunkel's converted kinky Bunny Girl Sex Slave who used to go by the name of Dr. Gallante is fantastic.
Your Gag talk is spot on, well done.
And boy you haven't left us on one cliff hanger but several.
What dastardly device isThe Orgasmatrix??
What bondage and kinky clothing will Dunkel's sex prisoners be placed in to humiliate and torture them further??
Will Dr. Gallante be able to turn against the evil of Dunkel and try to escape??
When Kagehime reaches Dunkel's base, what will she find, will she find the prisoners and release them or will she be captured and find herself as a guards plaything or being transformed into another Dunkel sex toy?????
Mitru, bring on the next part of this story with express speed.
Keep up the excellent work.

Thanks!

Hi Mitru!

I adhere to all the observations choc666 had!

I read about Kagehime and I thought: “Yes, it’s cool, but it doesn’t seem to be advancing the story”. The same seems to be true about Sindee’s predicament: You mentioned that her strength was fading away but I didn’t see that in the comic: She seems as defiant as ever, and even when Anke defies her with the Orgasmatrix.

I wish that criticism was respectful enough, because I love the rest of your story: an heroine who resist deviant sexual torture is great! Also I liked the setting: The Antarctica, a clearly inescapable place, after all, like Adriana lampshades, where are they going to flee? There is only iced waste.

I’m anxious to see the next chapter, I’m sure Kagehime will kick ass, but still I would love to see her and Sindee in the Orgasmatrix.

Hector

Thanks for your comments Hector

My intention was to introduce the kagehime char properly, but you're right about Sindee's story seems to run a bit slowly. I'll try to fix it in the future.

Hi there Mitru!

Thanks for your answer! I wrote only to tell you that there is not need to rush the story if Sindee (and hopefully kagehime) will be in the Orgasmatrix for a long, long time;)

Thanks

Hector