I have taken your suggestions to heart and revised the finish to "Carnal Knowledge", which I think will satisfy your cravings. I have expanded the story by approximately 15 pages and added some new scenes that I think all of our regular readers will enjoy. Thank you again for writing to us and giving us your excellent opinions. It really means a lot that you care enough to take the time to tell us what you think.

The next installment of "Carnal Knowledge" is expected to be posted on Tuesday, 11/29. I will send a message to the 'updates' forum when it is ready for viewing.

The new "Carnal Knowledge" update has been posted to the members gallery. Please see the updates forum for more information and a direct link.

That's great of you to say, Brainhusk. I'm glad that you noticed some of the small details. Stuff like that is fun to sneak into the stories to try to add just a little something extra. I'm glad that it worked. Much credit goes to Fin for his hard work and creativity.

How about this for a small detail? The image of Marcy on the cover is a mirror image of the rest of the pictures.

Is there some subtle meaning here?

Since Sentius now is in control of both Marcy and the cop, and his curiosity about human sexuality is unslated, is he going to perform the obvious experiment? And since he is on both ends of the operation, wouldn't that be a form of cyber-masturbation?

Just imagine the feedback loop that could develop...

-Mike

I assume that the image is reversed on the cover to make it easier to fit in all of the text. I don't know that for a fact, that's just a hunch. There isn't any intentional hidden meaning to the flipped image. Finister created the pic for the cover and Timo titled it, so thanks to them for the fine work.

As for your second question... what is the 'obvious experiment' that you speak of? I'm not sure what you mean...

To respond to OJ's remarks:

I'm very pleased that you feel that your subscription is worth the money. I have said it before, but it bears repeating: that is probably the best compliment that you can give to any of us. These days it's easy to find things to spend money on, so for you to come back to HIPComix each month and pay to see our comics means a lot to me, and I'm sure the rest of the crew feels the same way.

Fin and I intentionally went light on the cybernetics because we knew that we had a nice looking model in the 'Marcy' character and didn't want to take away from that. In fact, we debated over things like the headset/eyepiece but in the end I think a nice balance was struck between nature and technology.

Without giving too much away of the rest of the story, it's safe to say that Marcy's 'personality' will not be the same as RoboGrrl and RoboWoman. Her character was created for reasons other than as another fucktoy for Dr. Twisted. She will definitely figure into planning for future episodes.

Right...

Just finished going through the panels on the final episode of carnel knowledge. Pretty much a perfect ending. Lots of erotic content. Lots of panell of Marcy and of Marcy with the other "Girls"

Now that Sentius and the Doc are together there is even more scope for superheroine devilment. I can see the good doc moulding Sentius' personality and Sentius adopting him as some sort of mentor. Perhaps the Doc could wear some form of subtle implant to allow sentius to experiance his athletics with his growing harem.

A supercomputer has gone "Missing" Will Marcy get the blame? Will she care? Will the Docs next sheme ensnare a nosey heroine that starts to smell a rat?

How will the cybernetic implants evolve? will the doc be able to plant a spy in the midst of the superheoine community to help him cull their ranks for his nefarious purposes?

All question I'm sure will be answered in future episodes of twisted tales.

This was a grat episode that got better and better as it went on. congrats to both Finister and Doc for producing such a winner.

Thanks Mesmer, your opinions really mean a lot to me. I also want to thank you publicly in this forum for allowing me (us) to promote HIPComix on your site, the Hypnopics Collective. It is very gracious of you and has been a lot of help in getting the word out about what we are doing here.

Now that Carnal Knowledge is complete I am wondering what will come next in this saga. Several possibilities come to mind:

How long can Sentius and Dr. Twisted continue at this level of collaboration. I'm sure Dr Twisted looks upon Sentius as just a program, a tool to serve his plans. But Sentius seems to have plans of his own, and his implants for Marcy show that he has gone beyond Twisted's accomplishments. What does he need Twisted for--besides a roof over his 'head' and a mainframe to live in? Might Sentius decided to take over, maybe even putting implants into Twisted to better control him?

And what of Marcy's plans? In such a power grab there might be an opportunity for her to achieve control, using the other robogrrls as her troop.

Feel free to use any, all or none of these ideas. Just come up with something good!

-Mike

p.s. I seem to remember that there was some talk about a story of the origin of Valient Girl. How's that coming along?

-M

Hey Mick... thanks for the feedback. Here are my thoughts:

It seemed to me during "Carnal Knowledge" that the idea of a man being enslaved is quite unpopular. There weren't too many people who liked seeing the cyborg cop. So, I doubt I'll do anything even remotely similar with Dr. Twisted. Besides, he's too smart to let Sentius trick him into any precarious situations.

On the other hand, I think that Dr. Twisted is a lonely guy and will enjoy having someone (Sentius and/or Marcy) of his intellect around for conversation while they plan to take over the world.

Marcy is completely obedient and enslaved. Even though she has more autonomy than either Alpha Woman or Valient Grrl she still has no thoughts of trying to gain independence or escape.

Don't you worry, Finister and I have tons of ideas for future chapters. We probably have more ideas than time to implement them. We thank you for taking the time to post your thoughts, though. I'm always on the lookout for new ideas or storylines.

As for the origin of Valient Grrl/Valiant Girl... I'll let Fin handle the answer to that one. That's his pet project.

Hi Gang,

There will be a bonus Valiant Girl 'origin story' type thingy starting Saturday, New Year's Eve. The Valiant Girl origin story was originally going to be added inside the current ongoing comics, as flashbacks, but it takes place in a time period that can allow for different themes and fetishes to be explored....so I'm thinking of making it an ongoing comic as well.

Here's a hint:

It's a fact that when the Nazis occupied Norway they took over their 'heavy water' plant with intentions of making nuclear weapons among other things...

BUT....I bet you all didn't know the Nazis were also experimenting in creating a robobabe army of their own with superpowered nazi soldierettes!!

Oops, I think I said too much



Fin