Hector wrote: Hi B69:
I just love the light deconstruction you had in this story: Syn discovers she has been tracing a broken off boot heel all the time, the kidnappers aren’t as dumb as they seem and changed vehicles, the heroine discovers the situation needs reinforcement.
And here is the part that I loved: the superheroine Syn calls for help must be contacted in an over the top way: a signal only the chosen one could notice, not because this sounds cool, but because a really understanble motive: She wouldn’t answer her calls!
Really incredible! This plot has been used by Jimmy Olsen with his signal watch (that only Superman can detect) and in one of the movies, Lex Luthor contacts superman by speaking in a strange frequency. The realistic and funny part is that this device is used because the superheroine refuses to take your calls is one of the best parts I have read!
Great work! | 
