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SCAR CITY CHRONICLES CHAPTER 41 !
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Author:  Max Hass [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 9:25 am ]
Post subject:  SCAR CITY CHRONICLES CHAPTER 41 !
Last we saw of the Sentech security guards, there were bemoaning their status outside Tower 69. But that won't last very much longer!

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You didn't think we would make you wait for another action packed and suspenseful chapter of Scar City Chronicles, did you? See the fate of those who would serve the likes of Don Shelle as Whiplash takes matters into her own hands. The tide has turned!

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Author:  Hector [ Thu Dec 27, 2012 12:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: SCAR CITY CHRONICLES CHAPTER 41 !
Dear Max and Mitru:

Scar City Chronicles # 41 was light in dialogue: Enough to say the heroes are striking back. And not a moment too soon.

I loved the part with the ping grenade with the happy face. Whiplash at last is fashionable. Fighting evil with style!

I am anxious to see how they will rescue Dolly!

Great work!
Author:  Max Hass [ Thu Dec 27, 2012 5:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: SCAR CITY CHRONICLES CHAPTER 41 !
Hi Hector,

I'm sure you'll agree with me that too many writers tend to overfill their images with a bit too much dialog.

I'm the exact opposite. When Mitru spends hours creating these masterful images, it would be a crime to spread too much dialog across the action.

And, in reality, when does one stop to perform a soliloquy in the middle of a combat sequence?

One of the very real problems with the time frame between chapters is that one can lose the impact of the previous chapter. Given the amount of set up dialog in Chapter 40, the action of Chapter 41 is actually quite suited to the plot line.

We'll have plenty of monolog and dialog in the coming chapters.
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