It's the Holiday Season. Time to wrap up this part of Scar City Chronicles!



We begin Chapter 6 with a final look at what became of Doctor Viroy in the aftermath of her departure. Read on and see what choices she is faced with as she looks to her future on the outside of Sentech Industries and her ex lover.

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Hi there Max and Mitru!

I loved all the exposition, and so the sight of Juno in her beautiful uniform. But I also think that this device of explaining everything to no one in particular is abused. Why not letting Juno talk to a voice recorder or something?

That also would help if something goes very wrong with her formula and so, if she would not survive being her own guinea pig, at least anyone would know what happened.

This is only a comment, I’m not complaining or anything because I’m enjoying this tale a lot. Keep up the good work

Hector.

Good question, Hector.

My decision to have the two current chapters compressed and narrated in this way was simple. Since this stage of the story required a bit of foundation and time compression to move the story along, I elected to use the same trick James Cameron used in the second Terminator movie where Sarah Connor was telling her point of view in a similar way.

While it was annoying when edited in and out of the action, it set some key plot points.

Now that we're done with this stage of the plot, we're going to move ahead. No more time compression to move the plot along.

And more action! I've sent Mitru some of the most interesting action ideas yet. And I hope he's able to pull a lot of the ideas off.

You'll also get to meet a few new characters over the next 5 chapters. And more action!

Thanks for asking!