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JUSTICE FORCE N03 ADDED TO MEMBERS SECTION - APRIL 03 UPDATE
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Author:  Mitru [ Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:56 am ]
Post subject:  JUSTICE FORCE N03 ADDED TO MEMBERS SECTION - APRIL 03 UPDATE
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Hello Hipcomix Folks!

Here it's a new update in the Adventures of the Justice Force for members, you can enjoy the adventures of the intreprid Dr. Sindee Sawyer and her friends here:

http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=146038

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I'm sorry if there are some mispelling or grammatical errors in this update, I didn't got the text correction at time. But when I've got it I'll fix them.

I hope you enjoy the update, I'm eager for suggestions as ever about the story and comic. If you have some ideas or fantasies about the comic than you want to see on it.... contact me: via Hipcomix forum or mailing me to mitruthehunter@gmail.com

Happy April Fools!
Mitru
Author:  Hector [ Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: JUSTICE FORCE N03 ADDED TO MEMBERS SECTION - APRIL 03 UPDATE
Hi there Mitru!

I liked this issue. To tell you the truth, I'm not very attracted to see scenes of punishment or pain, so I hope to see the next exploit of our heroine.

So, this tale is settled after "Seed of corruption" and obviously, Dr. Krimhilde survived her ordeal. The doctor was very nasty when she was in the jungle, so this is almost as if she has escaped her own Karma.

The use of white letters upon black speech globes remembers me of batman style of speech in "Arkham Asylum". Does it have any connotation, or is only a stylistic choice?

I like the adventurer archeologist mixed with the spy thing, those two remember me of Indiana Jones and Belloq.
Again, this is not a critique or anything, but sometimes, the faces of your characters seem a little odd. Something about the eyes, maybe, I cannot point exactly what.

Keep up the good work

Hector
Author:  Mitru [ Fri Apr 08, 2011 3:10 am ]
Post subject:  Re: JUSTICE FORCE N03 ADDED TO MEMBERS SECTION - APRIL 03 UPDATE
Thanks very much Hector!

Your comments are much appreciated.

The use of the Black Globes in the text is only a question of styling, I wanted to do something different from my another works. I admitt that I have not read the Batman comic you're talking about.
And don't worry for the punishment/pain scenes, in the rest of the history I'm going to center more in the heroines teasing/exploit aspect.

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I like the adventurer archeologist mixed with the spy thing, those two remember me of Indiana Jones and Belloq


That was the idea

And about the expression, I work with a set of expression poses and I think that I must change them a bit, perhaps they're too much hard and I must make them a bit softer. I'll try to fix it.

Thanks for all
Mitru
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