Hello Folks!

The complete first chapter of the new adventure of the Justice Force is avaliable for members:

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Welcome to the House of Dolls, the deviant playground of "The Manequin", a house of horrors for sluty girls... but in this first episode... You're welcome to Middle Creek, the home of The Princess Puma, meet the young Tracy Temple, the mortal alter ego of the powerful superheroine and her friends and enemies...

In few words... welcome to the epic adventure of a teenager superheroine who gets in troubles.



Enjoy the adventure
Mitru

Hi there Mitru!

I must say that, since I read “Justice Force # 1”, I wanted to do this review, but I tought I needed the time to make this a good review.

When I saw this comic, it only has the first 7 pages, but you have added three pages that explain things better.

First of all, I think you have nailed Tracy character as a teenager: she has all the neurosis and angst we all have at that age. It seems very sad that Tracy calls “the official moron” to the only person who cares. But then, teenagers are not very wise or bright in their depression.

One thing that I notice is that Tracy has the same syndrome of the protagonist of “She´s all that” and the parody “It’s not another teen movie”: She uses “horrible glasses” and “overalls”. Well, she doesn’t use a ponytail but the point is that she is gorgeous and the only thing that is wrong with her is her superior attitude.

I think Tracy inherited the mantle of Princess Puma from his father (he seems like a native American) but I don’t now why she dress like that… I mean, it could make sense if she wants to occult or deny his alter ego of Princess Puma, but if she doesn’t have that in mind, why does she dress like that?
The last three pages that you added were necessary because I think they give us a view of the villain. “Im intoxicated with pleasure” is a good phrase.

I love the ASFR fetish and I will wait for the next issue anxiously.

Thanks

Hector

Thanks for your comments Hector.

The reason because you saw 7 pages, it's becasuse I've my galleries unhidden now and I'm going to upload new pictures day by day (these days I've got some personal distractions and I've done any new material) but I do 2-3 new pages per day which are uploaded when they're finished.

In this first update I've tried to do a correct introduction of the chars involved in the story. I wanted that the teenage personality of Tracy was clear, and I see that I've achieved it, she's like Peter Parker at his early days as Spiderman.

Thanks again for your support.

Dear Mitru:

When I saw your answer, I tought: Could Peter Parker be so ridiculously angsty in his comics?

But I remember then some reprints about the classic Lee/Distko era and man, you’re right! He could and he was!

Good Work indeed!

Hector