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VICTORY LEGION #5: ISHTAR under Dr. PRETORIUS' POWER! 
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Post VICTORY LEGION #5: ISHTAR under Dr. PRETORIUS' POWER!
Fitted with electronic control chips, Ishtar is ready and eager to obey Doctor Pretorius' every command!
But Doctor Pretorius also has his sexy wife Candice (the superheroine known as Brickhouse) to worry about too!
What a dilemma!
See all of the heroine in slavery drama in Victory City #5, now in the member's section!

http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=127010&g2_navId=xa9581448

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Wed Apr 11, 2012 4:22 pm
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Post Re: VICTORY LEGION #5: ISHTAR under Dr. PRETORIUS' POWER!
Hello Mr. Cryptic!! Nice installment , i wonder what the Dr. going to do? Especially sense he want to get back to his wife before she become upset with him. Honestly i hope he does do Ishtar!! Somebody has got to do Ishtar soon!! She's looking way to hot not to be done!! So i hope he give into his urges and does Ishtar!!

I think this is a clever plot twist. He doesn't want to cheat on his wife, but in order to get home to his wife quickly and use Ishtar love goddess powers to get back in good favor with his wife, he need to have sex with her so she can regain her powers. If he does do her, i hope it a longer encounter then the first time, their first encounter was short. I hope their encounter is more like her encounters with the Buzzard or Lord Prospero. Like i said i hope he does do Ishtar!!

It's funny the hero corrupting the villain, the Dr. can't win for losing!! I love this twist!! It like turning the table, with Ishtar playing the role of the bad guy and the Dr. playing the role of the good guy. (evil laugh) HA!! HA!! HA!! I really can't wait for the next update!!
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Wed Apr 11, 2012 5:28 pm
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Post Re: VICTORY LEGION #5: ISHTAR under Dr. PRETORIUS' POWER!
I'm glad you're enjoying it, C.L.!

I like to put a lot of tension in my domination and submission scenarios, almost like a rider staying on a bucking bronco. The master has to be clever and careful to keep the slave under control, and not have the slave turn the tables on them!

I'm really looking forward to completing the next update!


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Post Re: VICTORY LEGION #5: ISHTAR under Dr. PRETORIUS' POWER!
Dear lotchj and Mr. Cryptic:

The very thing lotchj wants (Dr. Pretorious doing Ishtar) is the very thing (that I believe) he must avoid at all costs.

Let explain me why: Ishtar is a goddess. Not any superheroine, champion of a race of amazons, strange visitant for other world or a badass normal. No, she is a goddess. Thousand of years old, incredible powers, a code of conduct completely different of a human. If you have read Gilgamesh, playing with a goddess never ends well for mortals, and you can toy with her neither.

Here we have the realistic situation: Pretorious has enslaved a goddess, but it hasn’t earn her respect. She manipulates him as… a superior being could do. She refuses to have sex with minions. She controls the entire scenario. Because she is superior.

What I love is the cruel irony of all: Pretorious has won by chance, but to get his wife’s forgiveness, she must cheat on her. If he keeps Ishtar as a slave, he eventually and surely will cheat her wife. If he lets her go, is a bigger moron than everybody already thinks. The very title: Doctor Pretorious Power, is the cruelest irony of all (totally inexistent).

I am anxious to see next issue!


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Post Re: VICTORY LEGION #5: ISHTAR under Dr. PRETORIUS' POWER!
Glad you are enjoying it, Hector! The next chapter became public about a minute ago :) .

You are right about Ishtar in the mythology, Hector. Gilgamesh refused to sleep with her, citing all the bad things that happened to her other lovers.

My Ishtar is an adaptation of the mythological Ishtar. We do know that she has to be a little careful about who she sleeps with. She won't sleep with Paul Barnes, but we're not sure why. Some of that will be developed more in the series at MC Comix.

You're right that there is some irony in saying Ishtar is under Dr. Pretorius power.

I'm actually kind of proud of that line "I don't fuck minions." and I'll explain why. It would have made a lot of sense, and been kind of convenient, if Ishtar, who wants sex, had sex with the two mercenaries, since Dr. Pretorius doesn't want to cheat on his wife. I was thinking about doing just that since it made sense. However, that would have made the story more like a cheap porno, and that's not really what I'm aiming for. By having Ishtar just simply state "I don't fuck minions," I was able to smoothly sidestep from taking the story where I didn't want it to go.

Ishtar is thoroughly dominated by the control chips, and if Dr. Pretorius commanded her to have sex with the minions, she would obey. But fortunately Dr. Pretorius is not evil enough to make her do what she really doesn't want to do.


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