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MEMBER'S GALLERY UPDATE 04-11-09! ADVANCER #5! (Feedback)
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Author:  battlestrength [ Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:56 am ]
Post subject:  MEMBER'S GALLERY UPDATE 04-11-09! ADVANCER #5! (Feedback)
11 April update for members.

http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/galler ... mId=104630

Join the newest superhero "Advancer" here at HIPCOMIX.com.

for--d to give birth to Mindstar's creation, Advancer struggles for her freedom as we draw this action packed story to a end with a secret that unnerves our hero!

Check it out in this action packed Issue 5! - "Birth"

Well that's the end for this run - a new superhero starts soon, so everyone please feel free to leave feedback.

Kind regards,

Lee
Author:  MacroLass [ Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:09 am ]
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"Oh my God, Mindstar is my sister!"

<cue ominous music> Dunt dunt dah!!!!! :shock:

Seriously, I can't say that I was really into the whole pregnancy thing but it was a nice twist at the end. And I'm glad that the amnesia plot wrapped up in her first adventure: a rather bold move on your part as many characters with that problem tend to let it drag on for far too long.

I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
Author:  battlestrength [ Fri May 15, 2009 5:17 am ]
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Hi,

Well played with the music :) I understand and I agree with you with regards to the pregnancy - but, I wanted her to give birth for several reasons. One reason is for Mindstar to take the egg and escape (So the story can continue later in further episodes) also it was a way for the shock to bring back our hero's memories.

I have to say her memories needed to be resolved in the first issue so we can see our hero coming to terms with the lost memories. But that will have to wait whilst White Raven takes centre stage.

Kind regards.

Lee
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