"Oh my God, Mindstar is my sister!"
<cue ominous music> Dunt dunt dah!!!!!
Seriously, I can't say that I was really into the whole pregnancy thing but it was a nice twist at the end. And I'm glad that the amnesia plot wrapped up in her first adventure: a rather bold move on your part as many characters with that problem tend to let it drag on for far too long.
I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.