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| Author: | Max Hass [ Fri May 12, 2006 12:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Pillow Talk Part 2 |
I'm very impressed with the way this story is developing. The details unveiled in this section of the tale gives the reader a basis of where the characters are going to go, but not at such a breakneck pace that one has any idea of what to expect. And scene 8 is a very nice action scene. A lot of work went into this one. Very well done! Looking forward to the next installment! |
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| Author: | Sturkwurk [ Fri May 12, 2006 12:32 am ] |
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Thanks Max, It's a long journey that I'm taking the reader on, I just hope everybody sticks with me. also: Radial blurs are your friends. Doug |
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