I'm very impressed with the way this story is developing. The details unveiled in this section of the tale gives the reader a basis of where the characters are going to go, but not at such a breakneck pace that one has any idea of what to expect.

And scene 8 is a very nice action scene. A lot of work went into this one. Very well done!

Looking forward to the next installment!

Thanks Max, It's a long journey that I'm taking the reader on, I just hope everybody sticks with me.

also:
Radial blurs are your friends.

Doug