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Request for story-Sexy Mummy Babe/Bible Black/MindControl 
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Post Request for story-Sexy Mummy Babe/Bible Black/MindControl
I have an idea for a story. To be honest, anybody could do the story, although I suspect Akonkid, Uruboros, and Finister would be most intrigued.

The story would probably have 2-3 parts for now. Here is a rough story outline for part 1.

To understand the motif, you probably have had to see Bible Black. This won't be as bloody and no one dies, however. It has the most twisted yet happy ending I could think of, although you have to wait for part 2 or 3 to see that.

It also features dickgirls, which should NEVER be confused with shemales.

Sorry I can't give you a panel number now.

If Fin, the story would involve as main characters Spellweaver, Troubalina (who is more of a "naughty girl" than an evil villianess), the MummyBabe, and the 'Evil' School Nurse (who I call Mistress Necra). For thoze who have seen Bible Black, think Kitami Reika. Minor characters (for now) would include schoolgirls and a mysterious headmaster with Croft-like elements that will be explained in a later story if so desired.

If AkonKid, the story could include Jupiter Justice or Emerald Tiger (short haired version), a "Naughty girl" type, a mummy babe, and Mistress Necra.

If Uroboros, its to his tatse. A heroine, a Naughty girl" type, a mummy babe, and Mistress Necra.

The story actually has no real villian, even the Nurse isn't actually evil. The antagonist is just, well, lonely and twisted yet sympathetic.

I have one other request: all women must have short hair, and the mummybabe can even be bald. The students also wear catholic schoolgirl or "sailor suits" a la Bible Black.

Storyline: For ease of description and to create a concrete picture, I will use Fin's characters, although the story could apply to anyone.

Spellweaver is assigned to pose as a student at a private school funded by a private charity run by an eccentric archeolist who happens to be the headmistress of the school. This is because there have been a series of art thefts that one of the students, Troubalina, may have been involved in.

The objective of the Superheroine Squad is to catch Troubalina in the act and get her to work for them. Troubalina ius seen as a troubled yet gifted individual, one in need of reform, not imprisionment; just as spellweaver was at one time.

Spellweaver and Troubalina were friends, perhaps even lovers at one time in the same gang. Spewllweaver reformed, Troubalina did not.

Troubalina is actually a friendly geek when not stealing stuff ands helps other students; Spellweaver more of an athletic and down to earth gal.

Both know who the other is, and Troubalina sees this as a game., and even Spellweaver does too, kinda . She has indeed conducted a number of thefts, and sees the presence of Spellweaver adding excitement to this.
Spellweaver is more concerned about the well-being of her friend and would like to work with her again, this time on the right side of the law.

Troubalina's next job is thus to steal the body of a mysterious female mummy in the Egyptian section of Headmisrtess Croft's museum adjoining the school and whose patronage by Metrobay citizens is used to pay the bills for the school. not jewelry, but the enitre body and give it to her "fence," the School Nurse, Mistress Necra. Troubalina knows nothing about the School Nurse's true identity or intentions.

Mistress Necra is the evil dickgirl version of the School Nurse. Her motivations are domination and sexual desire. She's not completely evil, though, as she wants her victims to enjoy their subjigation.

The Mummybabe is a servant of Misstress Necra. This is not of her own choosing, but based on Misstress Necro's possession of one-half of a special ivory dildo. the otherr half is inserted within the Mummybabe, keeping her 'relaxed' through its gentle pleasuring effects if that makes sense. When the second half is inserted within her, however, the Mummybabe becomes a lusty dickgirl that enslvaes girls through screwing them as its way of seeking affection.


I hope that doesn't sound too goofy.

The Mummybabe, even though she's completely bandaged up, is very sexy. The bandages should be thought of as painted on like bodypaint, if that makes sense.

One night Troubalina sneaks int the Egyptian Section and examines the Mummybabe laying on a slab. At ifrst she feels oddly sorry for the Mummybabe, thinking she appears lonely (perhaps there's some sad legend about her death). She feels oddly turned on and attracted to the Mummybabe's body. Evil School Nurse is spying on her. She reaches down and grasps her breast, causing the Mummybabe's eyes to open, glowing, and lock eyes with her. Here other hand, as she is entranced by the light, reaches out and accepts the second part of the mystic ivory phallus from Evil Nurse. A voice chants in her ears, leading her to plant the ivory phallus on the Mummy's mound. The dildo is fused to the Mummybabe's body. Mummybabe sits up and kisses Troubalina who then mounts Mummybabe and begins to ride her. They have sex and we get to watch;). Evil School Nurse dissappears back into the shadows, masutrbating, and expectantly waits...

As Spellweaver appears, sneaking into the room and spies the hot sex scene as Troubalina, the Mummybabe, and the Evil School Nurse orgasm. Spellweaver confronts Troubalina and the mummybabe, as Evil School Nurse changes to Mistress Necra and sneaks up behind her....


Fri Feb 22, 2008 4:26 am
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I will say this as a followup.

I have no idea on story length yet.

Much of what I gave is background. At least half of this story should involve MC/sexual content.

It should also be noted that the day before the attempted theft occurs, the schoolgirls, including Troubalina and Spellweaver, are brought to the Egyptian Museum by a couple of enthusaistic friends who are lesbians who live in the same dorm room. This is as part of a tour of the grounds hosted by, the Evil School Nurse who has goals of her own. Spellweaver and Troubalina would both want to know the layout of the area of course. Once there, the two girls take them too observe the Mummybabe's body. Both become visibily turned on and start to act strange as if entranced, and even Troubalina and Spellweaver start to "feel funny" shall we say. The Nurse intrudes upon them. Later that night, Spellweaver and Troubalina find themselves having a wild sex dream where they masturbate thinking of sex with each other and the mummy directing them. The next day they wake up, feeling like they have hangovers.


The lesbians are briefly shown as well, although their sex acts appear mechanical and zombielike and they are chanting in a strange tongue and wearing makeup to appear Egyptian.


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You have fantastic imagination, Leto, which is necessary to be a great writer. Is it an historical setting, I'm trying to imagination the school and then the Egyptian setting (in the school Museum ?)
I like the schoolgirl and naughty headmistress bit but find it hard to imagine getting turned on over a mummy which is a body that is all shriveled up, wrapped in bandages. Not impossible though.
Can you relieve me of the suspense, could you please tell me what is a dickgirl ?

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Fri Feb 22, 2008 11:18 pm
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Hello. Thanks for the compliments. Much appreicated!

The Mummybabe's body isn't shrivelled up at all. Think of it as a supersexy chick wearing a cross between skintight bandages and bodypaint. The outlines of her body and facial characterisitics, for example, could be visible although still covered up.

I thought the idea might intrigue some artists due to the challenge.

I got the idea from some mummy pics I found on Renderosity that were oftne cute, sexy, or attractive. I couild email you some if you'd like to see how a mummy can be really physically appealing.

A dickgirl is common in Japanese hentai (pervert or porn) anime (cartoons) and manga (comics). Essentially its a woman who has her clitoris transform into a big penis when aroused. This may be becuase she has been subjected to some weird drug. Thus she is not a shemale as she is definiteily a her; its just that she has a "pop out" dildo" if you will.

Would you like me to send you some pics of good-looking mummies?


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Post Dickgirl
Just after I was doing the post I logged onto latif's blog and there were some dickgirl sites. There seems to be lots of gay and sexual transformation stuff happening out there at the moment. They say if you have too much sex you can go the other way.
I'd love to see pictures of sexy mummies, can you post some here ? You will need a free account with photobucket etc, to link it externally with the IMG link or link it from the actual site. Cheers.

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Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:04 am
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No gay stuff for me unless its lesbians!

To be honest and rather crude, the whole dickgirl thing is so I don't have to see some guy "getting in the way of things," yet still see a chick giving head and the like. I don't want to see guys in my porn, but I like a good blowjob, doggystlye, etc, and thus the dickgirl thing as a compromise.

The only guys I want involved my sex fantasites are me-i just happen to take it to an extreme in that I guess that I don't even want to see other guys doing 'my' fantasy chicks:)


Here is what I think is a pretty sexy mummy girl. I certainly wouldn't kick her out of bed. We can tell from the outlines of her face that it is still symmetrical and beautiful, albeit covered.

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 010375.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 062761.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 078969.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 083685.jpg


The idea is to create a poser chcick cute like this girl, although she isn't poser:

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... eMummy.jpg

Here's one poser cutie:

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 046658.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 023719.jpg



Of course, for much of the story the face is bandaged but can still be seen to be very attracive. Thertefore we have the following:

Here are direct image links from phtobucket. They are from the Mummy Ressurected program for Vicki 3 from Renderosity by IgnisSerpentus.

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 042774.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 204887.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 33958x.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 33958c.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 33958b.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 905995.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 871152.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 846032.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 058215.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 929508.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 267379.jpg











And some much less well done and cruder pics...from a guy named sebulba

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 204887.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 204893.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 204887.jpg

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb30 ... 206153.jpg


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Leto, thanks for the enlightenment about dickgirls. I understand exactly where you're coming from in that respect and feel the same myself about that.
In other words it's a bit of an advancement of the strap on. Straight males don't really like gayness in males but gay chics are quite ok and is to be encouraged.
I have my update in HIPcomix to finish for Thursday and also I am doing research on pirates for my pirate queen comic over at out pg sister site, Hipcomics so there's no way I could start a new theme just at the moment.
I will need to do a far bit of research on the history of the pharaohs because I need to study up on mummies.
However, I do have Egyptian characters somewhere on my harddrive and I've seen that Egyptian scene in your images, it came with the original Daz Studio program. Fin can see this when he gets back from holidays and also Uroborus is back on board. However, I really like the dickgirl thing and will definitely get into that one.
Thanks for the great work !

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Mon Feb 25, 2008 9:04 am
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Hello. No problem. Thanks for the consideration.

If nothing else, I will be more than happy if people drew at least some utility from themes in this idea for future stories.


Mon Feb 25, 2008 9:38 am
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Thanks again for feedback Badaboom!

The only other thing I would add for people if they pick up the story in the future, is that they use this as a platform to experiment with a first person storyltelling narrative.

In addition, I early on it would be nice to have a couple panels of Spellweaver "proving" herself on the street by beating a couple "street level" or low level supervillians. The idea here is to demonstrate that she is a promising and competant superheroine who worked her way up the hard way if that makes sense.

Again though, even if this storyline only gives some ideas for other stories that's fine. Anything to help.


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Writing in first person narrative is a great idea because you can expose a lot of detail. You can tell the readers what the hero is thinking in detail. Just now, Daredevil comes to mind. He's thinking about his wife and his marital problems as he pounds a bad guy on the street. You can identify and relate with the character. He's a low key hero.

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Hmmm. This story sounds interesting. I might give it a shot....


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Thanks. I appreciate it!

We can talk more too about it if you want


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