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Lingerie Shopping - Chapter 4 
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Lingerie Shopping

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Northern Chill

Author's note: This is a story based on the characters from the Metrobay universe found at Hipcomix.com which is written by Doctor Robo and illustrated by Finister Foul. There are scenes of nudity, sex, profanity and mild violence in this serial so if this bothers you, move on now. Otherwise, enjoy!

All characters are used with the permission of the original author Doctor Robo.


Chapter 4 - Mirror Gazing
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"....understand how flimsy stockings could be used with a garter belt to improve one's appearance. I would think this stuff hides what you are trying to emphasize, " Valley murmured as she was handed several garments by her friend and crime fighting colleague Kelly, known to the general populace as Ms. Metrobay. The two had been at Luscious Lingerie for less than an hour looking around and selecting different items but Valaya found herself wishing she was off fighting a horde of super strong bad guys rather than go through this tedious chore. Several times, she had tried to get Kelly to go to the sales desk and finish things up but Kelly pulled away at the last moment to go look at another one of the store's items or just to look over one of the many attractive live mannequins that were one of the reasons Luscious Lingerie proved to be a magnet for shoppers in the Metrobay area.

The truth, though, was that the women posing as mannequins were doing it in mindless obedience to the devices wielded by the staff of the store and two of them, Alpha Woman and Snowflake, were fellow heroines normally but now nearing the completion of their first day as window fixtures. Judging by the way Sandra at the sales desk was glancing at Kelly and Valaya, it seems she was looking to add two more "figures" to the display.

" Excuse me? I was wondering if the item I had special ordered is in yet. It would be under the name Kelly West, " Kelly said as she glanced at a dark haired mannequin standing nearby that was wearing a dark red corset, matching garters and stockings and white lace finger gloves. As she glanced over, Sandra discretely changed the price scanner in anticipation of adding two more buxom crime fighters to the store's inventory.

Suddenly, and a great deal of urgency, Valaya ran over and tugged on Kelly's arm. " I just got a text message from one of the, uhhh, ladies back at the, ummm, company headquarters that there's something that needs our attention immediately! " the heroine muttered trying to play down the fact that several criminals were spotting breaking into a warehouse on the far end of the business district and Metrobay police had put in a call for assistance for us, " Valaya muttered with an attempt to disguise the fact that they were both members of the Superheroine Squad.

" Oh, darn!. Miss, could you credit all of this to my account and have it sent to my home address via courier later day? I'll pay for any extra cost you might incur and if you have any problems, leave a message on my email you have. Let's go, Valaya! " Kelly called out as she turned and dashed towards the exit just behind her colleague. Unknown to the heroine, her timing was fortuitous as it was that moment that Sandra tried to aim the mind control scanner at the heroine's eyes but failed with Kelly's unexpected movements.

As she watched the two women exit Luscious Lingerie quickly, Sandra felt a moment of disappointment at missing the two women to the store's "inventory" but this quickly dissipated when the sales desk phone buzzing and she knew Mr. Hanley was trying to contact them. As if a bolt of lightning had struck her, Sandra remembered Hanley's instructions to her and the sales associates concerning how to handle the departing women and realized she would have some explaining to do the next time she and the manager talked.




Back in the manager's office.........





Hanley smiled as he saw the monitor indicating that the changes to Selina were nearing completion and soon things would improve once again in the store. He contemplated contacting the store owner and updating him about the new store personnel but he decided against this seeing as he remembered the mayor was meeting with the owner over a zoning issue with a planned expansion of Luscious Lingerie in the future. Considering the expansion was important to Hanley's future place in the business, the store manager figured to put off the call to a more opportune time.

With a soft pinging sound, the computer announced that Selina's conversion was completed and Hanley moved swiftly to disconnect Selina from the machinery. Once that was done, Hanley helped the woman off the table and onto her feet before standing before her and admiring the newest member of the Luscious Lingerie staff. With breasts that looked to be 48FF in size, pouting lips, shapely ass and a waist any man would grasps his hands around during hot lovemaking sessions, Selina quickly made Hanley feel a tad uncomfortable in the groin area and he decided to have Selina start her orientation immediately.

" S. X. Toilles, please come over and initiate orientation procedure BJ-Hanley immediately, " Hanley intoned even as he loosened his pants and underwear and let them pool around his dress shoes.

" I hear and obey. " Selina intoned as she walked stiffly over to Hanley, fell to her knees in a stiff motion and pursed her lips in an ovular shape as she wrapped them around Hanley's hard cock. A small part of Selina's consciousness screamed silently in outrage and anger over what she was about to do but the dominant images and thoughts controlled her thinking and she found herself excited to please the man in front of her sexually.

" Mmmm, that's right, honey. Take it all in. Let that mouth do its thing and you'll make me very happy, " Hanley murmured as he felt Selina's tongue wrap itself around his cock. As he felt pressure start to build in his manhood, Hanley reflected that when the computers were first brought to Luscious Lingerie by the store owner and Hanley realized they could be used to brainwash select women into being perfect store employees as well as totally obedient sex machines on a permanent basis. His first few attempts with the computer were, to be honest, less than successful as the subjects either shook off their programing or were so clumsy with their sexual techniques that the store manager was for--d to remove all their programming and send them on their way with no memory or physical changes. However, with Selina, it seems his tinkering with the set-up had worked to perfection as she now had a physique that was better than ninety nine percent of the women that frequented the store and her technique in the art of fellatio was VERY good.

" Master. Approaching climax. Ready to receive semen in approximately 12.8 seconds, " Selina thought robotically as images filled her mind and she mentally prepared herself for the climax of her skillfully done work. When Hanley could not contain the pressure any longer, he unleashed a long stream of semen into Selina's mouth and throat that she swallowed as fast as she could. Even so, a few beads trickled down her chin and stained her heaving and sweat drenched bosoms in a very erotic manner.

Once he was completely drained, Hanley ordered Selina to stand up and go into the employee's change room where she was to shower and change into her work outfit, which she was programmed to retrieve from a closet and dress in a manner befitting the store. As Hanley watched Selina's shapely wiggle ever so slightly as she opened the door to the change room, the manager realized that he had forgotten, in all his enthusiasm over his newest employee, to check on the status of Ms. Metrobay and her friend. Cleaning up quickly and donning his clothes once again, Hanley took a seat at his desk and determined through the monitor feed available to him that the the women had left the store. However, the manager's serene mood quickly soured when he talked over the phone with the staff and learned things didn't go as he planned.

" I left the staff specific instructions on how to handle the heroine and her friend and if things had not changed at the last moment, things would have gone terribly wrong and left this store open to a lot of unwanted attention as a result. I think I'll have to talk to Sandra about her work attitude soon...hmmm.... " Hanley thought to himself as he watched the staff handle the heavy amount of customers as well as prepare the packages to be delivered to the women foremost in his mind.




Roughly four hours later..........




The hallways at Superheroine Squad headquarters were deserted early in the evening with most of the members off on night time patrols of the Metrobay area or in their private living quarters for personal reasons. In the case of Ms. Metrobay, Kelly West, it was definitely the latter. After a day where a fun shopping trip was interrupted by a gang of muscle bound thugs trying to steal a shipment of precious gems from a local warehouse, Kelly longed for some private time by herself. Brightening her mood, the Squad leader found that her purchases from Luscious Lingerie had already been delivered and waiting for her on her bed.

" Oooooh, which one I do try on first?...the push-up bra?....corset?....oh, I know!! " Kelly thought to herself as she looked over the various packages and took quick picks inside of each before settling on one. Opening up the red box, Kelly lifted up the article of lingerie and held it in front of her with both of her hands. Known as a bodybriefer or all-in-one, the lingerie was a combination bra and girdle that was popular in the fifties for women with voluptuous physiques and had seen an upswing in popularity in recent years. However, Kelly had to put a special order in for one that fit her given her extremely large breasts and overall physique. She eschewed the usual grey/white colors in favor of a bodybriefer that was satin red in color with bright white cloth diamonds sewn into the abdomen area and the material ending high in the thigh.

Removing her clothes and placing them on the nearby bed, Kelly quickly slipped on the bodybriefer and ran her hands over the garment's surface as she admired how the garment looked on her body. Kelly decided to take a look at herself in a full length mirror located at the opposite end of the room. As she moved, the heroine swore that there was a fly buzzing around her ears as she distinctly heard a humming noise that seemed to be growing louder by the second.

" Hmmm, maybe I should get one of these for Kristen or Tina. They certainly have the look to wear something like this though they might think its a bit old fashioned. Maybe if I....ummm...ummm...if I...why is my head throbbing? It's getting hard to focus...hard to...obey...hard....obey..follow instructions.... " Kelly thought to herself before the humming noise grew louder accompanied by the sensation that her thinking was being changed and there wasn't anything she could do about it! The blonde heroine tried to yell out for help but she was incapable of uttering a single word or syllable. Her body was equally unresponsive to her thoughts and, in fact, seemed to be responding to unspoken commands as Kelly watched herself assume a rigid posture with her arms rigid at her sides. As the seconds ticked by, the heroine's resistance to whatever was taking control of her mind lessened considerably and she didn't even notice the very faint green glow emanating from the bodybriefer's surface.

Over the next fifteen minutes or so, Kelly remained motionless and the only thing that changed in her appearance was the pupils in her eyes seemed to disappear as the cold computer logic took over the blonde's body and mind. If this had happened during the day, somebody from the Squad might have interrupted the process and led to a different result. However, this was not the case and after the bodybriefer was done programming Kelly's mind with the logic Hanley wanted, Kelly donned a long rainjacket and high heels before leaving a note for the Squad members saying she was called out of town on business interests and would return in seven days. With that, the statuesque heroine left the headquarters for her new home at Luscious Lingerie with barely anybody noticing......



To be continued......

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Another great sinister chapter...I wonder what will happen next?

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Sun Sep 28, 2008 7:04 pm
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Great story, NC. I love the mental image of Ms. Metrobay in the bodybriefer. Keep up the good work!

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Yep. Alot of good mental images. Awesome work!

Just a thought, how would you feel about someone doing some illustrations for your stories? I might know a girl with some talent....

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Thanks for the feedback, everybody!...looking at it, I think this serial might run 10 chaps instead of the planned 4-6 (I wanna squeeze in a few extra things I've mulled over and ratchet up the steaminess a bit as it's kinda tame so far). Akonkid, I have no probably with someone illustrating this serial as long as its ok with Finister and Dr. Robo and the art is keeping with their current protrayals. I've writen fiction in the past (both HiP themed and other tales a bit more, umm, off the path as well) and have worked with artistic gifted people before.

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Edit: Sorry! My idiot boyfriend didn't sign himself out.

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Edit: There we are.

Gee, just volunteer me for everything, why dontcha, eh, hun? Lol.

Hmmm, well, I wouldn't MIND doing some pictures for this wonderful story. I'd just have to be told what scenes illustrate exactly. Get back to me on that if you're interested.

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Trishbot, illustrate whatever part(s) of the story you find sparks your interest. As I've alluded, there even might might be a few of the scenes in the upcoming chapters.... :wink:

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