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Bird Duo Pt 3 - Old friends, a new companion, and payback 
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Post Bird Duo Pt 3 - Old friends, a new companion, and payback
The heroines are a "bird duo" called Bluebird and Sparrow, a big busty lead partner and a junior sidekick. Their costumes look a little bit like Robin from the TV show, the same type of footwear, tights, capes, etc... They are great athletes (an Olympic gymnast and a champion boxer) who took a “Super-Soldier” serum that doubled their strength and quickness.


Opening Scene: The heroes are leaving the jewelry store crime scene by jumping on their bikes. But their exit is being watched from the shadows by hidden figures.

Scene 2: As the bikes zoom away, a display light on Bluebird bike flashes. Bluebird yells out that her bike's tracer/bug indicator shows that a GPS tracking device was planted on her bike during the robbery.

Scene 3: Bluebird tells Sparrow to follow her lead and head for a former villain’s abandon hideout that’s in boarded up adult bookstore.

Scene 4: We see them go through the back of the store to hide their bikes.

Scene 5: A car pulls up to the front of the store

Scene 6: An Asian woman in a skin-tight leather and latex military uniform (something like the outfit the Baroness from GI-Joe used to wear) with the same insignia as the commandos from the jewelry store steps out.

Scene 7: her huge blonde bodyguard and a small mousy woman who looks more like a librarian than the commando she is dressed like follow her. The smaller woman is studying the pda in her hand. The bodyguard is built like the she-hulk but sexier which she shows off in her modified midriff showing sleeve-less uniform while the mousy librarian downplays her sex appeal with huge glasses, a tight bun hairstyle, and a looser fitting uniform.

Scene 8: The smaller woman is standing next to the car facing the commander while the bodyguard is staring at the store. The technician is confirming that the tracer leads to the store.

Scene 9: The group heads for the Store with the bodyguard dragging the technician by her wrist as the woman frantically tries to avoids coming along. The bodyguard reminds the technician that both her and the commander have each beaten the bird duo by themselves so they don’t need her to go get help. The commander tells her to shut up.

Scene 10: The perspective of the scene is looking down on the inside of the store from a small square shape panel in the ceiling near the rear of the store. From this view, you see the villains breaking into the closed store through the front door.

Scene 11: An over-the-shoulder close-up view of Bluebird looking through the small panel and observing the villains from a ledge near the ceiling. We see the villains walking towards the backdoor where the technician is pointing.

Scene 12: Bluebird flashes a sign to Sparrow who is on the ground looking up to her

Scene 13: Sparrow runs and hides.

Scene 14: The villains are about to open the backdoor. The bodyguard has her hand on the door as the Commander turns to the technician and tells her to go play in the corner and stay out of their way.

Scene 15: A low angle perspective looking upward of the two villains walking into the back of the store. We see a barely visible bluebird still hiding on the ledge hidden in the shadows

Scene 16: Another low angle perspective looking upward. The villains have separated and the bodyguard is passing by Bluebird's hiding place, we see Bluebird jumping from her ledge with something, which is not clearly visible in her hands. Her leap makes her look like a Samurai with a sword. The villain is unaware of the danger.

Scene 17: Bluebird smashes her weapon into the back of the bodyguard's head with an overhead two-hand sword stoke as she is landing.

Scene 18: We see the results of the surprise of attack as the bodyguard is knocked out and spawned on the ground.

Scene 19: A close-up of bluebird’s weapon shows that it was an extra-thick 18” double dido

Scene 20: Rear view of the commander in the foreground with Bluebird facing us in the background. The commander confronts bluebird from about 10 feet away in a martial arts pose, taunting bluebird about how she always beats her when they fight.

Scene 21: Side view of the lower half of the commander’s body. We see a rope bolo wrapping itself around her ankles.

Scene 22: The Commander looks down surprised.

Scene 23: A long thin rope connected to the bolo is yanked hard by Sparrow causing the commander to fall on her face.

Scene 24: A close up of the Commander falling on her face.

Scene 25: A groggy Commander is trying to get up

Scene 26: Bluebird clamps a chloroform glove on her face to put her to sleep

Scene 27: Bluebird does the same to the bodyguard who was starting to wake up.

To Be Continued.


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