Bluebird and Sparrow 2

The heroines are a "bird duo" called Bluebird and Sparrow, a big busty lead partner and a junior sidekick. Their costumes look a little bit like Robin from the TV show, the same type of footwear, tights, capes, etc... They are great athletes (an Olympic gymnast and a champion boxer) who took a “Super-Soldier” serum that doubled their strength and quickness. This is probably way too long to be a request but maybe someone can do it as a commission?

The Opening scene is of a jewelry store after dark. We are looking from the outside in and there is an open door and two commando girls (dress in skintight black military outfits) working on the wall-safe in the background. One is holding a spotlight while her silhouetted partner is dialing the tumblers.

Scene 2: However, hidden in the shadows next to the open door are more female commandos in the same uniforms. They are all holding ropes, gags, and small nets.

Scene 3: One of the hidden commandos tells the two girls acting as bait to act more convincingly. She also reminds everyone to stay clear of the trap by the front door.

Scene 4: A motorcycle crashes through the store window shattering the hidden commandos.

Scene 5: Bluebird and Sparrow jump in through the broken window, thus avoiding the traps by the doors

Scene 6: The leader screams for everyone to put on their electric-stun knuckles and chloroform-gloves and to attack. You can see the sparks from the brass knuckles in the dark from the villains. One or two of the girls are putting on gloves and have small gas canisters attached to their belts with a tube running to the gloves on their hands. There is a puff of gas coming from the fingers of the gloves.

Scene 7: Bluebird and Sparrow are back to back as several girls attack at once. The leader is standing back by the wall and yells at everyone to jump in.

Scene 8: Typical comic book fight scene but with one difference as the heroes are ripping the villains tops off. One girl gets monkey flipped by Sparrow who holds on to her top which rips in her hand while the commando is sent flying.

Scene 9: Another girl has her shirt pulled up over her head by Sparrow, covering her head, trapping her arms and exposing her breasts

Scene 10: Another girl is sent flying without her shirt into the wall next to the leader.

Scene 11: Bluebird grabs a girl by her collar and just rips her top apart right down the middle.

Scene 12: About half the villains are standing up, the other half are laying on the ground sleeping. The leader (who never moved from the wall and thus still has her shirt on) screams, “You can’t do that do us, come on girls, let get them.” You can see that the commandos who are still on their feet are in ready-to-charge positions and are angry. Including the girl with her shirt pulled over her head.

Scene 13: Two topless commandos attack Bluebird with their stun knuckles out. They are kind of airborne and attacking from different sides.

Scene 14: Bluebird grabs their stun knuckles and slaps them on each others breasts knocking the girls unconscious. (See there is a tactical reason for the nudity.)


Scene 15: Sparrow has jumped behind one of the commando with the chloroform-glove and is holding it over the girl’s face as she struggles to escape the sleeping gas.

Scene 16: Bluebird slapping a commando in the chest with an electric-stun knuckles.

Scene 17: Another girl gets slapped with both a stun knuckle to the chest and a chloro-glove over her face at the same time for a dramatic knockout.

Scene 18: We see that the only two left are the leader and the girl with her shirt pulled over her head. (They had both stayed on the wall)

Scene 19: They turn tail and run for the door.

Scene 20: The leader’s foot crosses an electric eye-bream activating the trap they had set for the heroes.

Scene 21: Several rope bolos shoot out, wrapping around the fleeting commando leader both pinning her arms to her side and entangling her legs.

Scene 22: The commando leader falls to the floor while the girl with her arms over her head is standing next to her and is caught in crossfire of several bolos traps. We can see multiple bolos wrapping around her body.

Scene 23: The girl with her arm over her head ends up semi-mummified with the rope bolos from her knees to her breasts with a few strands of rope pinning her arms above her head.

Scene 24: End of the fight, all the commandos are both half naked and tied up in their ripped outfits. Sparrow is kneeling down finishing the final knots on a topless commando’s hogtie while Bluebird is picking up the commando leader (who is the only one with a top on) and carrying her to a display case

Scene 25: The leader is bend over at the waist with her chest flat against the top of the glass display case while Bluebird is tying her ankles to the legs.

Scene 26: Bluebird rips her pants off much to the leader dismay. Sparrow is standing next to the leader playing with her hair in a taunting manner

Scene 27: Blue had walked away to pickup an electric-stun knuckle. She is slowing walking towards the leader with sparks flying from her hand as she taunts her victim by telling her what she found lying on the floor.

Scene 28: The wide-eye expression on the gagged leader’s face as she looks like she is about to scream. Bluebird tells the leader that she should be thankful that she is only going to use the lowest setting on her.

Scene 29: A from-the-rear view of Bluebird spanking the leader with the stun knuckles. On impact there are sparks flying.

Scene 30: The look of pain on the leader’s face and the look of delight on sparrows face who is right next to her.

Scene 31: Another slap from Bluebird but viewed from a different overhead angle so the whole scene can be seen at once

Scene 32: A delighted sparrow kisses the leader on her gagged lips and tells her that she going to play with the other girls now but she knows that the leader and bluebird will have fun.

Scene 33: Sparrow has a kid in the candy store look on her face as she straddles the girl with the shirt pulled over her head and starts to fondle her breasts. Bluebird is in the background spanking away.

Scene 34: The leader’s gag has been removed and she is crying and begging to be allowed to squeal on her plans as well as anything else she knows about the criminal element in the city. In the background you hear a lot of muffled giggling

Scene 35: Sparrow is tickling the underarms of the girl with her shirt pulled over her head. We can see her breast wiggling and swaying from side to side as she tried to escape the torture.

Scene 36: Sparrow has removed the commando’s boots and is tickling their feet: She is screaming and giggling.

Scene 37: A up close view of the leaders ass as you can see hand prints and burn marks. Bluebird has her hand (the one without the stun knuckles) resting on the crack of leader’s ass.

Scene 38: A split screen shot of both heroes finger-banging their victims

Scene 39: A split screen shot showing the victims faces as they spasm in orgasm. (Obliviously one of them is still covered by a shirt.) Both girls are arching their backs with their mouths open wide.

Scene 40: A split screen of the heroes licking their fingers

Scene 41: Another split screen of the two heroes humming to themselves as they selected their next victims to torment. We see them grabbing the next girl in line.

Scene 41: Is a wide angle shot showing two lines of tied up commandos with worried looks on their faces, as they know they are next.

Scene 42: The page is divided into eight to twelve sections, four to a row. The first panel is a close-up of a nipple being pinch/twisted by bluebird. The second panel shows the victim’s face and her reactions. The third panel is a close-up of an ass being spanked by sparrow and the fourth panel shows the victim’s face and her reactions. This pattern repeats until all the panels are filled alternating between sparrow and bluebird and a different victim each time. There are spanks, nipples pinches, and bare feet tickles, with the last two panels showing sparrow’s glove as she finger-bangs a victim and the face in the next panel belongs to the girl with her shirt over her head moaning. (For both bondage and comedic purposes the shirt stays where it is the whole story.)

Scene 43: Everyone is lined up next to one another face forward on their knees with their naked asses in the air. By this time the heroes have striped everyone and you see the remains of their outfits by their bound ankles. Bluebird and Sparrow are standing behind the commandos with belts in their hands. Bluebird is delivering a lecture and Sparrow just has a gleeful look on her face.

Scenes 44 and 45: The heroes are spanking the helpless commandos. A front and back view to show the action and reaction of everyone involved.

Scene 46: Shows Bluebird continuing the spanking while Sparrow is sitting on the face of the girl with her shirt over her head.

Scene 47: In the foreground is a topless Sparrow (She has pulled her own shirt up and it is bunched up over her breasts) still straddling her victim who has a magic marker in her hand and is trying to write her personal phone number on Sparrow’s chest. (Sparrow has lowered the victim’s shirt just enough so that her eyes are showing and she can see a little.) The background has Bluebird watching with a bemused look on her face and a bunch of whimpering commandos with their heads down hoping to avoid her attention

Scene 48: Is a close up of Sparrow continuing to straddle her helpless victim who is nearly finished. Sparrow is chastising the girl for taking so long despite the fact that she is providing a major distract by both lightly fondling and tickling her breasts with a small brush.

Scene 49: A back view of a topless Sparrow walking toward Bluebird who is next to her upright bike by the broken window. Bluebird chides her for being so shameless and Sparrow responds that some of us got it like that.
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Scene 50: The heroes are lifting the bike out of the window. Sparrow asks if they should have just deactivated the trap instead. And Bluebird tells her no because she hopes the first cop to response get caught in it.

Scene 51: A close-up of a still topless Sparrow blowing a kiss to her play-toy and promising to call when she gets out of prison.

Scene 52: The play-toy is seen nodding her head rapidly as she blushes all over her naked body. It’s a full body shot of a girl lying on her stomach with a blissful look on her face. (This way so we can see the belt marks on her ass as she is still recovering from a toe-curling orgasm.)

Scene 53: A back shot of the heroes driving away on thier motorcycles with Sparrow pulling her shirt down with one hand.

Scene 54: A long low perspective shot showing the two bikes disappearing into the background but in the foreground you see two pair of boots that look just like the ones the commandos were wearing stepping out of the shadow.


To Be Continued.