"What Dreams May Come" was a great story. I hope we will see more adventures of Betty Noir.
If you don't mind a suggestion: how about Betty investigating a white slavery ring? Of course, she gets captured by the slavers and is in for a tough time for a while.
-Mike
p.s. And now for a negative note; the explosion in picture 51 is not too good, not believable. Because of the quality of the rest of the story, I am sure you, as the artist, are aware of this.
I hope you don't mind my criticism of this one frame. All the rest are good.