Heya folks,

My Sunday update is going to be a little late. I should have it uploaded Monday afternoon. Trying to fight this flu bug the last couple days. It's been interfering with my diabolical schemes

But should only delay us about 12 - 16 hours.

My apologies for any inconvenience.

No problems. I know the feeling quite well.

Bummer, dude.

I've been fighting a cold all week long myself. Hope you get past it and get well. A few more hours just will make it more anticipating. :)

Thanks a lot for the support guys!! that's really kind of you!

Also my thanks to you all for your patience - the update is now ready here:

http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/galler ... mId=116203

I usually have heroines captured within the first 5 to 10 pages. I decided to try something different this time.

I wondered if lesser known superheroines were caught right off the bat, would it not make their captivity as arousing? At the same time there's also the chance I stretched it out too long. I'd be interested in what you all think. If you hate this more drawn out style I can go back to the quicker captures

And many thanks again for your all's patience and my apologies for any inconvenience.

Ironically, I got a flu shot a month ago - go figure

As the good master of suspense Afred Hitchcock stated, "anticipation and build-up is key to payoff", and this was more than worth the wait so far.

Then again, I've always enjoyed and prioritized story, so my perspective might be a bit skewed. It's a hard balance between a quick payoff at the expense of story and character or build-up that drags on a bit, but I think you have a nice middle-ground with this story. Looking good.

I like the capture being detailed instead of being a quick capture. The update was how and I like the villainess's traps.
By the way does the villainess wear hearted panties;)

If the story is done right, it doesn't matter if the victim falls early or after a decent building up. This story is top knotch the way I see so, it works to have her fall at the end of the episode.

Thanks for the feedback all!

I'm so used to telling stories with Pink Pussycat and she just seems to come to life in dialogue so easily for me. Trying to give Valiant Woman her own voice and personality. Don't want her to be a Wonder Woman clone but can't have her doing Pussycat "You wicked fiend" cutesy stuff either - ha ha. But it's fun getting to know a knew set of characters.

Yeah AshleyChloroformed... heart panties... heart bras... even heart shaped pubes - lotza luv

I'd just like to ad that the familiarity of Pink Pussycat , in that the readers know her background means you don't have to spend time explaining details about the heroine, whereas with this new group of characters you need to spend a moment or two 'explaining the rules' as it were regarding each character in terms of strengths and especially for the heroines their weaknesses.

So, for any new heroines story, there will need to be that drip-drop of information required even as you move the plot along, unlike Pussycat - 'her she is' then opps, she's captured by Max/ROPE.

For new stories, The Isle of Ick, I think started well, with everything leading up to the end of the first episode - the location, the bad guys hideout, the heroines, and the twist.

Mind you, I did like the chessboard scene, as it served both purpose of kinky fun, and telling us all about the Queen, and let us bide time until the heroines got their turn.

Seconded! The reader needs the build up with a new set of heroines and villians. I also enjoyed the chessboard scene. It illustrated, quite beautifully, the Red Queen's wicked motivation.

Thanks!

I just loved issue 4.

Always a treat to see Max use some of his 'assets'. ;)

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This issue is shaping up to being a classic and it's ranks together with the famous superheroine squad series.

Finister you have outdone yourself:)

That's very kind, AshleyChloroformed!! I really appreciate it!

Cool bondage with the dildoes.

How is the framing of the heroines coming along, hope they are in trouble. Hope some fails er save the reputation of the heroines ;)

Hi AshleyChloroformed!

That slimeball Max Indeks may yet still defame the superheroines. That dastardly villain!

he he any scene of defaming involving sex, like a tied heroine in bed is being done by villainess. The heroine protests on video but the villainess's henchwoman replaces the protests with the heroine wanting more thrusting.

The last issue is superb, WOW!

I am a great fan of all your work, but the last one rock. I can wait to see that weird machine working on the captive heroines.

Thanks Mitru !!