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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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The return of "Original Sin"
Now available in the members area of HIPcomix, it’s “Original Sinâ€
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Sun May 03, 2009 6:42 pm |
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Trishbot
Arch-Criminal
Joined: Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:11 pm Posts: 115 Location: in your bed...
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Finister Foul returns with a vengeance!
The art is simply jaw-dropping. Everything from the lighting to the backgrounds to the composition is just stunning. It's been a long, painful wait, but the art alone is more than enough to keep me more than satisfied. The retro designs of Kelly and Trudy are both incredibly charming and yet very, very sexy.
The writing is also just as well done. Doc's in top form, showcasing an exciting "refugee" storyline with an old-school vintage feel to it. It's very unique and the dialogue and the dream sequence within the story is some of the best he's done yet, which is saying quite a bit. Quite a few answers to previous questions are given while others are addressed or raised. Little details like Ethel Battleaxe and Kelly's sisters (Kathy, Kandy, and Kitty) really help make it all seem so three-dimensional and, though it's primarily sexy, these characters and this world are just so REAL compared to everything else out there.
Truly a one-of-a-kind world and a great chapter. Welcome back guys.
_________________ "It's not Pink! It's Lightish Red!"
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Sun May 03, 2009 7:12 pm |
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Akonkid
HIPComix Artist
Joined: Sat Mar 11, 2006 8:33 pm Posts: 310 Location: Nowhere
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Everything she said and more. Fin's art definitely is inspiring for me to step up my game and Doc's writing is as sharp as ever. Not too many other comics around with this sort of fun campy, sexy atmosphere and it's definitely refreshing. It can't wait for more and I'm already looking forward to what happens next.
_________________ "If she would just do as I say, I wouldn't have to resort to mind control!"
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Sun May 03, 2009 10:22 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
Evil Genius
Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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I also agree here
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Mon May 04, 2009 3:13 am |
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leto17
Evil Genius
Joined: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:22 pm Posts: 259
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I like the idea of lesbians in the 1940s:).
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Doctor Robo
Forum Moderator
Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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Members Area Update for 5/17: "Original Sin" #5
Now available in the members area of HIPcomix, it’s “Original Sinâ€
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Sun May 17, 2009 2:37 pm |
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Akonkid
HIPComix Artist
Joined: Sat Mar 11, 2006 8:33 pm Posts: 310 Location: Nowhere
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I was wondering where Agent Summer had disappeared to after Kikka had captured her. Glad to finally know. And the knowledge is so very satisfying. Lovely facial expressions throughout this chapter and very sexy girls from beginning to end.
Good to see that Agent Darling retains some of her more important skills, even as a mindless zombot too, as Von Ick is not doubt aware.
_________________ "If she would just do as I say, I wouldn't have to resort to mind control!"
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Sun May 17, 2009 5:21 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
Evil Genius
Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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Love the 1940's panties and the zombots alot
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Sun May 17, 2009 6:31 pm |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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Hey guys... thanks for the compliments!
We have a LOT of twists and turns in store for "Original Sin" over the course of its run. We're kind of in a slow burn right now, but things are certain to heat up very soon!
How soon? Check out the cover for issue 6: http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery2/main. ... emId=78663
See you in two weeks!
- Doc
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Sun May 17, 2009 7:31 pm |
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Trishbot
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Joined: Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:11 pm Posts: 115 Location: in your bed...
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THIS is a slow burn?! Wow. This is gonna be great!
Fantastic update too. Mmmm, Agent Summer was delightful! And Kikka continues to both creep me out and turn me on. Lol.
_________________ "It's not Pink! It's Lightish Red!"
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Mon May 18, 2009 12:39 am |
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leto17
Evil Genius
Joined: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:22 pm Posts: 259
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Great story so far. Hot women and character designs, great sets, and good dialogue make for an excellent story. Great work fleshing out the villians, the victims, and the heroines.
How come mainstream porn and erotica can't make stuff this good? They ALWAYS screw it up somehow.
I wonder if Gothikka ever thinks about the old days...
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Mon May 18, 2009 12:39 am |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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Members Area Update for 5/31: "Original Sin" #6
Now available in the members area of HIPcomix, it’s “Original Sinâ€
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Sun May 31, 2009 1:11 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
Evil Genius
Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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Very lesbian action and love the tracking down concept
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Sun May 31, 2009 1:44 pm |
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Trishbot
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Joined: Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:11 pm Posts: 115 Location: in your bed...
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Lol! I loved how Kelly "earned" the title of Miss Metrobay. Very clever!
Very hot, sweet scene with Kelly and Trudy... though if Kelly seriously thinks those "accidents" were by mistake, she deserves to be made into a zombot. I guess she's just a true blonde. Lol.
Can't wait for more! It's looking so good!
_________________ "It's not Pink! It's Lightish Red!"
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Sun May 31, 2009 5:41 pm |
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Trishbot
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Joined: Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:11 pm Posts: 115 Location: in your bed...
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Sorry... I'm just impatient to praise you guys... again. Hope you don't mind me throwing the shout-out post here.
"Now available in the members area of HIPcomix, it’s "Original Sin" #7 by Doctor Robo and Finister Foul!
http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery2/main. ... emId=79107
Kikka Brust and Feelix Von Ick did not get where they are in life by letting a couple of amateurs like Kelly and Trudy escape their clutches so easily. After Feelix sends his obedient Zombots to retrieve their catch, Trudy has a surprise of her own and is on a mission to enlist some help to get her friend back!
It’s a breast-tacular, mind control-errific, superheroine-a-rama good time with two new costumes, a new character, and more babealicious flesh than you can shake your stick at! So where’s the only place you can read ALL of the Metrobay Universe’s latest and greatest hits? That’s right – HIPcomix.com!
http://memberslogin.hipcomix.com/galler ... emId=43177 "
... and it certainly satisfied. A new heroine, some flashy new outfits (3 total!), some suspense and dramatic foreshadowing, REALLY big boobs, and Trudy being as adorable as always. Can't go wrong, can you? Nope... nope you can't.
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Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:30 pm |
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Ashleychloroformed
Evil Genius
Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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Nice filling in
Loved the comic update, by the way Trudy needs a girlfriend maybe Nightengale
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Mon Jun 15, 2009 12:08 am |
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Finister
HIPComix Artist
Joined: Mon Aug 29, 2005 7:29 pm Posts: 902 Location: Metrobay
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AshleyChloroformed, I like how you think.
I think Gadget Girl's a big tit fan though....
Smitten wit der titten.
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Tue Jun 16, 2009 10:16 am |
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Ashleychloroformed
Evil Genius
Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:01 pm Posts: 285
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Hmmm you need to have lesbian dating service or normal male on female service that arranges blind dates to lure heroines.
Maybe you'll have some heroines that will go for the lesbian route.
But what about one of the agents or Kikka maybe.
But I can also see Nightengale n Gadget Gal getting entangled together in a tight spot
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Tue Jun 16, 2009 10:31 am |
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Doctor Robo
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Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:35 pm Posts: 1289 Location: Metrobay
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Members Area Update for 6/21: "Original Sin" #8
Now available in the members area of HIPcomix, it’s “Original Sinâ€
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Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:46 am |
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leto17
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Joined: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:22 pm Posts: 259
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These last couple chapters have been very well done.
EXCELLENT work on the blowjob, by the way. Very well done!
Kelly looks fantastic as a zombot, and the Angels of Desire Zombots, although they all have their own individual and uniquely beautiful characteristics, work well together as slaves in terms of creating an aura of eroticized uniformity.
I'm glad Feelix got a little relief-he's earned it!
I also like how poor old Marcy is scandalized by the entire thing. Mechana needs to get her to loosen up
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