First of all - another great chapter, especially the use of the new controlunits. I've been wondering if we would see any of the drone units again - every army needs cannon fodder, but nobody has ever had as sexy a source of cannon fodder as Sentius. Maybe have a controlunit lead a "drone squad" to bring in recalcitrant heroines.

Not that I want to be pedantic -- actually, I do want to be pedantic -- with only mother and daughter there are only 2 permutatuons possible, and 1 combination. You'll nee more of the Squad to get more permutations.

-Mike

UGGGHH!! Stopping at sixteen pages, it like torture. LOL

Another awesome chapter to an already awesome series. The young brunette midriff blows my mind away. (I'm a sucker for that look on that body type)

I do have one question though,

Did Sentius' programming hone Alpha Woman's telekinetic abilities to where she could take over Snowflake's will or did she have it and know how to do it before. I do remember the shower scene, but there it just seems like she was projecting what she was feeling to Snowflake and Solaris. Just a curious thought.

I feel as if the clarity and single-mindedness of the H.E.R. programming allowed Alpha Woman (or in this case, 'Blue Controlunit') to focus her powers and use them in a way she may never have even thought possible. Kind of a 'necessity is the mother of invention' type of situation, know what I mean?

Thanks for all the great comments everyone! Keep them coming!

- Doc

Awesome, I was thinking it was something like that. This story just gets more interesting as it goes. I really loved going through the scenes of this week's chapter, but I really hated getting to page sixteen and realizing I have to wait for the next installment. This "got to have it now" society that we live in today has had a bad affect on me. I must learn that good things come with patience.

Well, that makes me feel good in that it's nice to know that you are looking forward to each week's issue and that we always leave you wanting more. I guess that means we are doing our jobs.

If you all went out and brought a couple dozen more supporters like yourselves to the site, then Finister and I could quit our day jobs and crank out comics all the time. Until then it's slaving away 9 to 5 during the week and then cranking out stories on the weekend. I will admit, there are worse things I could be doing with my life...

- Doc

Uggh, don't remind me. Mine's more like 7-6, M-F, but I'm salary so I don't get overtime

Fin, indeed, is a busy man. He worked on the first part of the FB series inbetween his reg job and the updates on this site. We definitely need more viewers so they can see how good the art is on the site and the artists can get compensated more for their good works.

I was mostly thinking of the Permutations of story plots but I forgot that in Forum Land every phrase or concept is subject to literal interpitation. Oh well I stand corrected.

If you all went out and brought a couple dozen more supporters like yourselves to the site, then Finister and I could quit our day jobs and crank out comics all the time. Until then it's slaving away 9 to 5 during the week and then cranking out stories on the weekend. I will admit, there are worse things I could be doing with my life...
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I find alot of my fellows are shy to sign up to a pay site since so much free is available. I for one find this cost very worth expence. Plus how do you broach the subject... I know this great site where they draw big titted women being transformed into robots.... I deal with to many folks who don't see the erotic charm of the concept.

Believe me, I know the feeling. Sadly, there is a reason why we all uses aliases for our profile names. It is just easier that way. I guess I was thinking about spreading the word to other people in the various online forums and sites that we all visit, places where similarly themed topics are discussed. Those are the places I am trying to reach out to in order to promote our site and this comic in particular. If anyone knows of such sites that I may have missed, please feel free to send me the address!

- Doc

I loved this chapter. From Alpha Woman's "new" powers to Aunt Marcia to the extremely attractive brunette in the tank top (I might be biased...), but it's another winner and yet another painful wait until next Sunday.

Dude, I'm right there with ya on that one. That Brunette is the breas.., dang it, I'm mean the best looking non super-heroine (poser creation) I've seen on this sight.

Sorry, I have not been on for a bit. I like the way the story is unfolding, or at least how I think it is unfolding...

So the skills of Dr. Twisted are needed to try and battle the army Sentinus is building...why do I get the feeling that any way to defeat said army that Ted is going to come up with will also use mind control?

Hoping that Ted demands Belinda be freed as well to help him...and all the evil that could create... or perhaps she can be a test subject?

Bonus on the fact that you are continuing to throw in hapless citizen's of Metrobay from time to time.

Looks like the good guys (ahem gals) need some reinforcements...we all know that all the super heroines are more than happy to come out and help.

P

I second pelusa1ca on all counts. I also like the new preview pic for the upgrades. Its always nice when the plot thickens as it has been doing in this last episode!

I have posted the cover for Sunday's update, issue #21 in the overall "Superheroine Squad" series. You can find it here:

http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery2/v/HIP ... 1.jpg.html

As Leto alluded to, I have also posted another cool promo pic by my good friend and resident artistic genius Finister Foul. For a guy who claims that he doesn't quite 'get' the mind control and ASFR genres... he sure as hell knows how to make great comics!

http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery2/v/200 ... 1.jpg.html

As always, questions and comments are most welcome and highly encouraged. That's what these messageboards are for!

- Doc

Both previews pics are great. I like the status update pic of the Superheroines. They're don't appear to be that many left!


Although...whatever happened to Spellweaver? Is she on special assignment and just not around?

We have ideas for some of the heroines who have been featured in the short stories (Spellweaver, Knyght Fighter, Violet Star, etc.) but have not appreared in "Superheroine Squad" or "Twisted Tales". Once "Superheroine Squad" is over we still have plenty of stories to tell, and will need some fresh characters to help tell them!

- Doc

To recap, "Superheroine Squad" is a three episode (and counting) sequel to the hit adult comic "Doctor Robo and Finister Foul's Twisted Tales". In it, the eponymous heroine team learns that their enemy Sentius has returned with an even more sinister plot to turn all of Metrobay's beautiful and buxom women into mindlessly obedient human robots. If you haven't yet checked out "Superheroine Squad", here are just some of the various fantasy genres you will find:

Mind Control
Bondage
Robots
Nudity
Adult Situations
Sexy Superheroine Costumes
Even Sexier Halloween Costumes
Physical Transformations
All-Around Bad People Doing Bad Things to Good Girls

In this week's issue, Mechana and Silver Satin have traveled to Metrobay Prison to have a little chat with Ted Twiss, the former villain known as Dr. Twisted. Are they desperate enough to enlist the help of one of Metrobay's most notorious criminals? At the same time Snowflake has been cornered inside Sentius's factory and is in danger of joining her former teammates as Sentius's cybernetic slaves. Will Ms. Metrobay reach the freaky facility in time to save her young comrade? The only way you'll know for sure is to join HIPComix and catch every issue. Not a member? What are you waiting for? Sign up today and stop missing out!

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I think you found your form in this chapter. I liked the way you allowed BlueControlUnit to access her previoius memories to help firm up her capture of SnowFlake. Her ability to control her physical form by retracting the nanoprobes to make for an enticing lure and then have Snowflake consume them was so evil. It showed how firm Sentius had control of the women.
Solara is extra fetching as a RedControl Unit and the fact that SnowFlake has been made a handmaid for BlueControlUnit is a unique wrinkle.
I also liked the added cruelity of the text as the Mother and Daughter being bonded as one simply because they chose to watch Televison. That is an evil point of view. I love it.
There is little hope and no winners unless your a fan of evil.

Good stuff, good stuff, good stuff! I like the Blue SlaveUnit thing, and I look forward to seeing what kinds of duties that entails.

I've really enjoyed the hell out of this story so far, and it looks like things are going to be shaken up a bit soon, with the arrival of Ted Twiss in the picture, which is good, because if something doesn't happen soon things are going to get too repetitive (and it's not like there are many heroines left anyway!). I'd also like to see Sentius making use of some of his slaves, or getting some kind of sense as to what all those other nameless, faceless slaves do as part of their regular duties.

Though hopefully though this "shaking things up" won't mean that the good gals win, that's all I'm saying. Or at least, I hope by the time all is said and done, that at least ONE of the good gals remains under someone's control permanently! I understand that you want the good team to probably win overall in the end, much as I hope that doesn't happen.

I kind of like when there are multiple bad guys who are enslaving women in different ways, and it's especially interesting when one slave switches from being in one person's control to another's. So far it's all been Sentius with a little bit of Max Indecks (though his controlling hasn't had much consequence)...it's time for someone else to throw their hat in the ring!

I'm also looking forward to the flashback episode hinted at in that one teaser image!

What else can I say about this jaw-dropping, mind-blowing series that hasn't been said? It rocks.

Alpha Woman in particular is a stand out here, with the delightful, adorable, and very sexy Snowflake really coming out and turning heads. One of the hottest induction sequences into the H.E.R. collective yet. Really well done.

Oh, and I'm still quite partial to Patricia and Raquel too. That might be bias on my part, but, screw it, they're still hot characters.

Great chapter. Again, the wait for the next installment is almost painful.