Now up in the member's gallery, Legion of Superheroines #22!

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While Chance has enslaved Notre Dame, Sparrow and Firefly, Ms Proctor decides to attend to her own "playthings" in the villian's holding chamber. Taunting the captive heroines, Ms Proctor decides to make an example of Starflair - once again! With the Legion all but finished and even the powerful Lambda syndicate unable to stop her, Cyren decides to execute her final plan to make herself the most powerful being on the planet! But there is one loose end Cyren has forgotten to tie up...could it be the heroines last hope? Find out in Issue #22!

noooooooo.......... keep sparrow, notre dame and firefly like they are mindless trollops

I must insist that Legion of Superheroines is my favorite comic. But I have some problems finding the time to make a good post. Sorry.

I really understand Adrienne’s position. But instead of the old “Silence you fools!” she should have uttered that other classic: “I’m surrounded by idiots”. I don’t say anything about Ivette, but Red Lotus has had training as a superheroine and is talking out loud the plan in a room that could be bugged. Not the most impressive feat… ah yes… it’s the old exposition (to us, the audience).

And about Night Raven: She must have knew better about believing any promise Miss Proctor makes, Justice must have heard before the old “Not so different” villain speech, but is StarFlair who takes the cake: After being almost drowned, she really must not be defiant and use the old “brave words”.
And after all this, my favorite villain, Tempest, is strangely shy and lost in her thoughts. Could she be pondering her destiny? thinking about her… er… more evil clone? Or simply thinking about how Red Venus told her that she can go to hell? (that would be so typical... everyone is in mortal danger, and she only can think about her relationship with Red Venus)

Meanwhile, Ciren is almost ready to complete her master plan and then (and only then) betray her associates. Where I think you went to far is in the the red caption in page 323. The irony of Cyren thinking “Nothing can stop me now” would be most glaring with only Electra’s silhouette showing (remember that I told you about the “missing robot”)?.

I loved all those superheroes clichés in you work. I certainly can understand that you want to explore other genres like fantasy or pulp adventure, but for me, you have mastered the superhero storytelling… and the babes are certainly the most beautiful!

Thank you for your work, I assure you is appreciated.

Hector